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Life expectancy and medical care

It has been said that medical care advances and development has make longer people’s life expectancy and quality. However, other people claim that this consequence leads to many disadvantages. In my view, having a longer life makes possible the chance to discover new knowledge and information that can be used to help human race, rather than unleash consequences to the word.
The fact of having a longer life allows every person to do more things in the world and society. We cannot imagine the things and discoveries that important scientists, such as Einstein or Newton, could make if they just lived 5 or 10 years more. The biggest beneficiary of these medical developments is the human race, since it is going to use all the knowledge and information that people are discovering to improve more aspects of our lives.
On the other hand, we have this negative view towards longer life expectancy. Some people claim that if individuals have a longer life, then they are going to produce more waste and consume more natural resources that our planet is not able to produce and loose. This perspective is only considering the bad aspects of living more, but it is not taking into account the fact that there are going to be more discoveries and new technology that can help us solving these sustainable issues.
As a matter of fact, living during more years gives us the chance to do more things in our single lives. Those things can be amazing scientific discoveries, development of new technology, new ways of obtaining clean energy, more medical advances towards certain issues, etc. In fact, all the things that a person can do during a longer life can counteract the disadvantages of doing medical investigations and supporting more individuals in the world.
It has
been said
that medical care advances and development has
make
longer people’s life expectancy and quality.
However
, other people claim that this consequence leads to
many
disadvantages. In my view, having a longer life
makes
possible the chance to discover new knowledge and information that can be
used
to
help
human race,
rather
than unleash
consequences to
the word.

The fact of having a longer life
allows
every person to do more things in the world and society. We cannot imagine the things and discoveries that
important
scientists, such as Einstein or Newton, could
make
if they
just
lived
5 or 10 years more. The biggest beneficiary of these medical developments is the human race, since it is going to
use
all the knowledge and information that people are discovering to
improve
more aspects of our
lives
.

On the other hand
, we have this
negative
view towards longer life expectancy.
Some
people claim that if individuals have a longer life, then they are going to produce more waste and consume more natural resources that our planet is not able to produce and loose. This perspective is
only
considering the
bad
aspects of living more,
but
it is not taking into account the fact that there are going to be more discoveries and new technology that can
help
us
solving
these sustainable issues.

As a matter of fact, living during more years gives us the chance to do more things in our single
lives
. Those things can be amazing scientific discoveries, development of new technology, new ways of obtaining clean energy, more medical advances towards certain issues, etc. In fact, all the things that a person can do during a longer life can counteract the disadvantages of doing medical investigations and supporting more individuals in the world.

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