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Some people think that government should provide free education in all level. But some says university fees should be payed by children. Discuss

it is undeniable that education is fundamental right of every child. There some population believe that it should be given freely to every child in every level. But few people argue that graduation studies should be afforded by children themselves.
The main reason for why people say to support all level education is firstly, it creates equal opportunity for every child. Consequently, children can aquaire their education without any status difference. Secondly, this education helps them to achieve better life in the future. Due to high enrollment fee most of children cannot afford the payment so that many of them discontinuing their studies.
On the other hand if the government give education in free of cost, there have many drawbacks. To begin with the quality of edueducation go down. By providing free higher education everyone would come and join to the university. As a result, the quality of education will get affected by the aimless students and the number of dropout would be increase. Furthermore, by increasing pupils in the college student tutor relation also decrease due to the low concentration.
I believe that it much better to afford fees by students themselves in university. If the government rise the fund for all level education that will affect some other important sectors like infrastructure and Healthcare. Hence, government could not provide fund for their development.
To sumup, it is more clear that giving free education in universities will not be good and that will cause more problems than attributes. However, it is better to give primary education in free of cost.
it
is undeniable that
education
is fundamental right of every child. There
some
population
believe that it should be
given
freely
to every child in every level.
But
few
people
argue that graduation studies should
be afforded
by children themselves.

The main reason for why
people
say to support all level
education
is
firstly
, it creates equal opportunity for every child.
Consequently
, children can
aquaire
their
education
without any status difference.
Secondly
, this
education
helps
them to achieve better life in the future. Due to high enrollment fee most of children cannot afford the payment
so
that
many
of them discontinuing their studies.

On the other hand
if the government give
education
in free of cost, there have
many
drawbacks. To
begin
with the quality of
edueducation
go down. By providing free higher
education
everyone would
come
and
join
to the university.
As a result
, the quality of
education
will
get
affected
by the aimless
students
and the number of dropout would be increase.
Furthermore
, by increasing pupils in the college
student
tutor relation
also
decrease due to the low concentration.

I believe that it much better to afford fees by
students
themselves in university. If the government rise the fund for all level
education
that will affect
some
other
important
sectors like infrastructure and Healthcare.
Hence
, government could not provide fund for their development.

To
sumup
, it is more
clear
that giving free
education
in universities will not be
good
and that will cause more problems than attributes.
However
, it is better to give primary
education
in free of cost.

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