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Some people believe that individuals who earn a lot of money are the most successful. Others say that the individuals who contribute to the society (such as scientists or teachers) are the most successful.

It has been a controversial question that what is the main measurement for being successful? It is believed by some individuals that people who earn more money are the most successful, whereas, others assume that doing social activities are more important.
To begin with, some people think that money plays the most vital role to become successful in various aspects of life. Earning more wealth can be a great sign of booming in people’s business, however, it does not mean that these people success in their personal lives. For instance, the owner of DAMAC, which is known as a prosperous firm in the globe, has divorced for three times and all of his children avoid meeting him due to his brutal behavior at home. Therefore, he has faced a significant fail in his relations with his family members.
On the other hand, others value executing positive social contributions more than wealth because they have set a special goal for themselves, which is being effective in the society. They aware that by achieving this aim, they can help numerous people. Take teachers as an example, although their salaries are low in most countries and they live in grueling conditions, they try hardly to teach pupils and flourish their talents by recognizing and developing them. Because they believe that by doing their occupations, not only they can help students to create a prosperous life for themselves in the future but also they fulfil their needs for being useful.
To sum up, I suppose to become successful, people should regard both these subjects equally to gain money and be influential in communities.
It has been a controversial question that what is the main measurement for being successful? It
is believed
by
some
individuals that people who earn more money are the most successful, whereas, others assume that doing social activities are more
important
.

To
begin
with,
some
people
think
that money plays the most vital role to become successful in various aspects of life. Earning more wealth can be a great
sign
of booming in people’s business,
however
, it does not mean that these people success in their personal
lives
.
For instance
, the owner of
DAMAC
, which
is known
as a prosperous firm in the globe, has divorced for three times and all of his children avoid meeting him due to his brutal behavior at home.
Therefore
, he has faced a significant fail in his relations with his family members.

On the other hand, others value executing
positive
social contributions more than wealth
because
they have set a special goal for themselves, which is being effective in the society. They aware that by achieving this aim, they can
help
numerous people. Take teachers as an example, although their salaries are low in most
countries and
they
live
in grueling conditions, they
try hardly
to teach pupils and flourish their talents by recognizing and developing them.
Because
they believe that by doing their occupations, not
only
they can
help
students to create a prosperous life for themselves in the future
but
also
they fulfil their needs for being useful.

To sum up, I suppose to become successful, people should regard both these subjects
equally
to gain money and be influential in communities.

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