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some individual believe that the primary goal of universities should be to provide information and skills needed for future work. others however feel that the main objective of universities is to give students access to knowledge for its own values regardless if the information is useful for the job or not.

Universities play important role in every student life. students learn a lot of things from university about their carrier and life. Minority of people think that if university should be providing information about their primary roles. On other hand some people say that is not useful information for student’s jobs. According to me its good for student if university interduce their primary rules to students. I will discuss about these statements and my opinion in upcoming paragraph.
To begin, students gain a lots knowledge from universities when they studies overthere, they will learn studies as well as knowledge about their living standard. According to one majority, indiviuals say that if university provide information to students its better for their future. Student learn how to do their jobs like they know work environment, how to talk with other person and so on. For example, university give knowledge about primary goal then student follow these rules and they will make also their own rules due to that their life is so easy because they take every step according to their own plan so that’s way is good for students.
On other hand, other majority say that is not useful for students. They think that student need to do only study in university rather than doing anything else. According to them, they will loose their grades in study if they will get loose marks then will not get best oppurnnity in future.
In my opinion, universities have to provide knowledge about their primary role due to that student learn a lot knowledge about their work like they learn how to survive in community, they learn value of things so I think so it better providing knowledge to them.
In conclusion, knowledge is boosted by students then universities provides variety of information about things. Student will try their experience in their workplace then will get success fast ratherthan time wasting. so I agree with first majority of peoples. I think better than others.
Universities play
important
role in every
student
life.
students
learn a lot of things from university about their carrier and life. Minority of people think that if university should be providing
information
about their primary roles. On other hand
some
people say
that is
not useful
information
for
student’s
jobs.
According to me
its
good
for
student
if university
interduce
their primary rules to
students
. I will
discuss about these
statements and my opinion in upcoming paragraph.

To
begin
,
students
gain a lots knowledge from universities when they
studies
overthere
, they will learn studies
as well
as knowledge about their living standard. According to one majority,
indiviuals
say that if university provide
information
to
students
its better for their future.
Student
learn how to do their jobs like they know work environment, how to talk with other person and
so
on.
For example
, university give knowledge about primary goal then
student
follow these
rules and
they will
make
also
their
own
rules due to that their life is
so
easy
because
they take every step according to their
own
plan
so
that’s way is
good
for students.

On other hand, other majority say
that is
not useful for
students
. They think that
student
need to do
only
study in university
rather
than doing anything else. According to them, they will
loose
their grades in study if they will
get
loose marks then will not
get
best
oppurnnity
in future
.

In my opinion, universities
have to
provide knowledge about their primary role due to that
student
learn a lot knowledge about their work like they learn how to survive in community, they learn value of things
so
I think
so
it better providing knowledge to them.

In conclusion
, knowledge
is boosted
by
students
then universities provides variety of
information
about things.
Student
will try their experience in their workplace then will
get
success
fast
ratherthan
time wasting
.
so
I
agree
with
first
majority of peoples. I think better than others.

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