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Prison sentences are often too light, and crime rates are growing in many major cities. Capital punishment is necessary and good Do you agree or disagree?

It has been establish that the prison terms are too short which lead to an increasing number of crime in various cities. It is a common belief that capital punishment is a necessary and great tool to solve the above problem, however, I firmly believe that there are lots of diadvantages of capital punishment.
On the one hand, capital punishment aganist the aim of setting up a prison, which is punishing and educating the trouble makers. Killing those criminals only fulfill the purpose of punishing without creating any educational value. For example, keeping offenders in the prison for almost their entire life, which provide an environment of them to think and learn from what they have done, may be more educational. Second, capital punishment is seen as unethical since everyone has their right to protect their body and survive. There are lots of questions about whether local authories have the right to end someone’s life just because they have done something unacceptable. If these questions are not solved, a vast amount of disagreement will still exist when capital punishment is really set up.
On the other hand, some support using capital punishment to punish the trouble makers. First, since the prison sentences are too light, therefore, people are not afraid of engaging in illegal activities. As the percentage of what they gain is sighificantly higher than what they may have to face when they are caught. However, a majority of humans prevent themselves from dying. So, if the capital punishment is set up, humans will consequently think twice before they do something illegal. Second, humans are taught to take up responablilties of what they have done. For example, pople support that there should be capital punishment if the offenders killed someone, since he need to pay for his pervious behaviour. Therefore, capital punishment should be set up to tackle with the most serious crimal activities.
In conclusion, I disagree with the above statement about capital punishment. I believe there are various potential manners to lower the crime rate, for instance education and subsidy. Despite opposing view, I still againist that capital punishment is necessary and good, since it is unethic and mismatch with the aim of setting up a prison.
It has been
establish
that the prison terms are too short which lead to an increasing number of crime in various cities. It is a common belief that capital punishment is a necessary and great tool to solve the above problem,
however
, I
firmly
believe that there are lots of
diadvantages
of capital punishment.

On the one hand, capital punishment
aganist
the aim of setting up a prison, which is punishing and educating the trouble makers. Killing those criminals
only
fulfill the purpose of punishing without creating any educational value.
For example
, keeping offenders in the prison for almost their entire life, which provide an environment of them to
think
and learn from what they have done, may be more educational. Second, capital punishment is
seen
as unethical since everyone has their right to protect their body and survive. There are lots of questions about whether local
authories
have the right to
end
someone’s life
just
because
they have done something unacceptable. If these questions are not solved, a vast amount of disagreement will
still
exist when capital punishment is
really
set up.

On the other hand
,
some
support using capital punishment to punish the trouble makers.
First
, since the prison sentences are too light,
therefore
,
people
are not afraid of engaging in illegal activities. As the percentage of what they gain is
sighificantly
higher than what they may
have to
face when they
are caught
.
However
, a majority of humans
prevent
themselves from dying.
So
, if the capital punishment is set up, humans will
consequently
think
twice
before
they do something illegal. Second, humans
are taught
to take up
responablilties
of what they have done.
For example
,
pople
support that there should be capital punishment if the offenders killed someone, since he need to pay for his
pervious
behaviour
.
Therefore
, capital punishment should be set up to tackle with the most serious
crimal
activities.

In conclusion
, I disagree with the above statement about capital punishment. I believe there are various potential manners to lower the crime rate,
for instance
education and subsidy. Despite opposing view, I
still
againist
that capital punishment is necessary and
good
, since it is
unethic
and mismatch with the aim of setting up a prison.

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