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Some people believe that the extinction of animal species is a natural process and humans should not intervene. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that the extinction of animal species is a natural process and humans should not intervene. gYA
Animal species are in endangered, while some people argued that it is a natural process and there is no need of human intervene in this process. This essay agrees to it, because protection of these animal species is too expensive and it is better to secure the animals which are useful for the humankind. Sheltering the animal species which are dying out is good but the only problem is it costs a lot. So even if we spent half the money which is spent on animal conservation, we can eradicate poverty in the world. South Africa is an example for that, this nation spent 76 billion dollars on conserving these endangered species but there is no use of it, some species got extinct, inspite if they spent that money on eradicating poverty or on any other thing, the country would be much developed. It is favourable to conserve the animals which are useful for humans because it doesn't cost very much and its even easy to focus on protecting the animals which are useful for the people, instead of focusing on all endangered species. For example, if we decide to secure the aquatic animals, it woud be very difficult and also it takes a lot of money and effort. In conclusion, it is agreed that there is no need of human intervene in the natural process of animal extinction, because it is very expensive instead, we need to focus on preserving animals which are beneficial to humans.
Animal
species are in endangered, while
some
people
argued that it is a natural process and there is no need of
human
intervene in this process. This essay
agrees
to it,
because
protection of these
animal
species is too expensive and it is better to secure the
animals
which are useful for the humankind. Sheltering the
animal
species which are dying out is
good
but
the
only
problem is it costs a lot.
So
even if we
spent
half the money which is
spent
on
animal
conservation, we can eradicate poverty in the world. South Africa is an example for that, this nation
spent
76 billion dollars on conserving these endangered species
but
there is no
use
of it,
some
species
got
extinct,
inspite
if they
spent
that money on eradicating poverty or on any other thing, the country would be much developed. It is
favourable
to conserve the
animals
which are useful for
humans
because
it doesn't cost
very
much and its even easy to focus on protecting the
animals
which are useful for the
people
,
instead
of focusing on all endangered species.
For example
, if we decide to secure the aquatic
animals
, it
woud
be
very
difficult and
also
it takes
a lot of
money and effort.
In conclusion
, it is
agreed
that there is no need of
human
intervene in the natural process of
animal
extinction,
because
it is
very
expensive
instead
, we need to focus on preserving
animals
which are beneficial to
humans
.
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IELTS essay Some people believe that the extinction of animal species is a natural process and humans should not intervene.

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