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No doubt, a few years ago, due to the existence of gender difference many restrict tions were implemented on women in doing some particular tasks but after the revolution it was spoiled which considered as a positive or negative development has become a matter of discussion.The essay shed light on this topic along with my rational perspective and its consequences which are justified below. To begin with, a silver clouds are in form after Revolutionary which encourage everyone to live free and independently.To clarify, the changes arise in the idilogy of orthodox people which break the boundation on ladies who have a misconspiration about the woman that they can do nothing unless cooking.To site an example, recently a lady become vice president in United States who set an example for womens that they can do whatever they want to do. Furthermore, one and one turned into eleven which accelerate to both in doing something by carried some responsibilities. To explicate, it has convenient

No doubt, a few years ago, due to the existence of gender difference many restrict tions were implemented on women in doing some particular tasks but after the revolution it was spoiled which considered as a positive or negative development has become a matter of discussion. The essay shed light on this topic along with my rational perspective and its consequences which are justified below. To begin with, a silver clouds are in form after Revolutionary which encourage everyone to live free and independently. To clarify, the changes arise in the idilogy of orthodox people which break the boundation on ladies who have a misconspiration about the woman that they can do nothing unless cooking. To site an example, recently a lady become vice president in United States who set an example for womens that they can do whatever they want to do. Furthermore, one and one turned into eleven which accelerate to both in doing something by carried some responsibilities. To explicate, it has convenient oRg
No doubt, a few years ago, due to the existence of gender difference many restrict tions were implemented on women in doing some particular tasks but after the revolution it was spoiled which considered as a positive or negative development has become a matter of discussion. The essay shed light on this topic along with my rational perspective and its consequences which are justified below. To begin with, a silver clouds are in form after Revolutionary which encourage everyone to live free and independently. To clarify, the changes arise in the idilogy of orthodox people which break the boundation on ladies who have a misconspiration about the woman that they can do nothing unless cooking. To site an example, recently a lady become vice president in United States who set an example for womens that they can do whatever they want to do. Furthermore, one and one turned into eleven which accelerate to both in doing something by carried some responsibilities. To explicate, it has convenient to raise step equally by husband and wife in this inflation period. For instance, in the many parts of the world females are doing part time job and in some sector they spend for day at work which also boost up the economy of the nation. According to my perspective, discrimination by gender is a wrost situation ever that the lady who born the kings are actually live in the imprisonment of thoughts. To explain, even in present there are some places where women have no right to go outside and working in the the man's environment. For example, a survey revealed by the world trade organisation in year of 2016 which based on human rights that in the countryside areas of India womens have no right to go outside just because of the foundation and rituals. All in all, in the modern era, the Revolutionary changes dawn the equality and bailed from the orthodox thoughts which gives a new face to see the women's empowerment in today's society.
No doubt, a few years ago, due to the existence of gender difference
many
restrict
tions
were implemented
on
women
in doing
some
particular tasks
but
after the revolution it
was spoiled
which considered as a
positive
or
negative
development has become a matter of discussion. The essay shed light on this topic along with my rational perspective and its consequences which
are justified
below. To
begin
with, a silver
clouds
are in form after Revolutionary which encourage everyone to
live
free and
independently
. To clarify, the
changes
arise in the
idilogy
of orthodox
people
which break the
boundation
on ladies who have a
misconspiration
about the woman that they can do nothing unless cooking.
To
site an example, recently a lady become vice president
in United States
who set an example for
womens
that they can do whatever they want to do.
Furthermore
, one and one turned into eleven which accelerate to both in doing something by carried
some
responsibilities. To explicate, it has convenient to raise step
equally
by husband and wife in this inflation period.
For instance
, in the
many
parts of the world females are doing
part time
job and in
some
sector they spend for day at work which
also
boost up the economy of the nation. According to my perspective, discrimination by gender is a
wrost
situation ever that the lady who born the kings are actually
live
in the imprisonment of thoughts. To
explain
, even in present there are
some
places where
women
have no right to go outside and working in
the the
man
's environment.
For example
, a survey revealed by the world trade
organisation
in year of 2016 which based on human rights that in the countryside areas of India
womens have
no right to go outside
just
because
of the foundation and rituals. All in all, in the modern era, the Revolutionary
changes
dawn the equality and bailed from the orthodox thoughts which gives a new face to
see
the women's empowerment in
today
's society.
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IELTS essay No doubt, a few years ago, due to the existence of gender difference many restrict tions were implemented on women in doing some particular tasks but after the revolution it was spoiled which considered as a positive or negative development has become a matter of discussion. The essay shed light on this topic along with my rational perspective and its consequences which are justified below. To begin with, a silver clouds are in form after Revolutionary which encourage everyone to live free and independently. To clarify, the changes arise in the idilogy of orthodox people which break the boundation on ladies who have a misconspiration about the woman that they can do nothing unless cooking. To site an example, recently a lady become vice president in United States who set an example for womens that they can do whatever they want to do. Furthermore, one and one turned into eleven which accelerate to both in doing something by carried some responsibilities. To explicate, it has convenient

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