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Money cannot buy happiness it is often claim but with money you can buy most of thing that are necessary for happiness good food accommodation entertainment travel quality health etc no wonder most people want to make as money as possible do you agree or disagree

This modern day, everybody run for property at morning to night because it is one of the thing which is fulfil their needs. Although many people say that by wealth we cannot buy peace of mind, we can buy things which depend on the money, suchsuch as the quality of Healthcare food and entertainment, etc. I totally agree with this statement to a large extent for any reason all the argument ensuring in further paragraph.
To begin with, every person on the earth wants to keep prosperity in their life. So people can try to salary because all the things like quality Lifestyle, enjoyable trip and sufficient Medicare which are achieved by fund. However, everyone has no same thinking and each person can find laughter from different kind of source someone has like to watch movies and another have to go for long drive and enjoy, but most of people who have enough capital and time have gone for International Tour with family.
Nowadays, medical Centre is too expensive and if you want to better and Secure treatment, thenthen you have to go reputed hospital, which is the highly need cash so people have to ear much bill.
On the contrary side, sometime people Run for earn more and more money, thereforetherefore they have busy with their work and cannot enjoy the pleasure of life. While people, which is not economic economic wealth can find entertainment in the life, rich people cannot even they have everything which they want.
To conclude, it is true that peace of mind cannot buy from the money, but via wealth, we can buy all things which are based on joy.
This modern day, everybody run for property at morning to night
because
it is one of the thing which is
fulfil
their needs. Although
many
people say that by wealth we cannot buy peace of mind, we can buy things which depend on the money,
suchsuch
as the quality of Healthcare food and entertainment, etc. I
totally
agree
with this statement to a large extent for any reason all the argument ensuring in
further
paragraph.

To
begin
with, every person on the earth wants to
keep
prosperity in their life.
So
people can try to salary
because
all the things like quality Lifestyle, enjoyable trip and sufficient Medicare which
are achieved
by fund.
However
, everyone has no same thinking and each person can find laughter from
different
kind of source someone has like to
watch
movies and another
have to
go for long drive and enjoy,
but
most of people who have
enough
capital and time have gone for International Tour with family.

Nowadays, medical
Centre
is too expensive and if you want to better and Secure treatment,
thenthen
you
have to
go reputed hospital, which is the
highly
need cash
so
people
have to
ear much bill.

On the contrary
side, sometime people Run for earn more and more money,
thereforetherefore
they have busy with their work and cannot enjoy the pleasure of life. While people, which is not
economic economic
wealth can find entertainment in the life, rich people cannot even they have everything which they want.

To conclude
, it is true that peace of mind cannot buy from the money,
but
via wealth, we can buy all things which
are based
on joy.

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