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importance of preserving old buildings

There is no doubt that preserving specific buildings have played a crucial role for many years in several countries. For one thing, it is vitally significant because particular structures such as palaces, churches, and empires all provide an insight into the history of the country. Moreover, they will show us how people many centuries ago lived their lives. Without them, we could only learn about them by books; thus, it would undoubtedly be sad if this was the only way to see them. Secondly, many of these buildings are not only strikingly beautiful but also, provide high income to a country as many tourists visiting them. The Great Wall of China, for instance, is a great place that attracts visitors every year so, they subsequently spend money to see this wall just for a moment. However, it can also be argued that although protecting premises can make an outstanding contribution to the country’s economy, replacing them with educational constructions make more space for studying purposes.
There is no doubt that preserving specific buildings have played a crucial role for
many
years in several countries. For one thing, it is
vitally
significant
because
particular structures such as palaces, churches, and empires all provide an insight into the history of the country.
Moreover
, they will
show
us how
people
many
centuries ago
lived
their
lives
. Without them, we could only learn about them by books;
thus
, it would
undoubtedly
be sad if this was the only way to
see
them.
Secondly
,
many
of these buildings are not only
strikingly
beautiful
but
also
, provide high income to a country as
many
tourists visiting them. The Great Wall of China,
for instance
, is a great place that attracts visitors every year
so
, they
subsequently
spend money to
see
this wall
just
for a moment.
However
, it can
also
be argued
that although protecting premises can
make
an outstanding contribution to the country’s economy, replacing them with educational constructions
make
more space for studying purposes.

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