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hsaring information about academic world, business, scientific research

People are divided into two groups because of sharing information about research, business and the academic world. Some of them think that it is not good sharing information with others and others think reverse of it.
Firstly, getting information is not an easy task. People struggled while they were finding new thing which is very important. It is a good result for their works and effort. Naturally, they do not want to share this information to others. They think others should work, struggled, give too much effort to gain same or like information. Result of sharing, bigger rivals can be born. It cannot be said that they are wrong. It is kind of spying in business. They think it is the worst thing ever can be done sharing information. Most of them want to be the one, without any rival. Moreover, they think that their information can bring award to someone else or they can steal their studies in academic world and scientific research.
However, sharing information cannot be just about bad thing. You can get better information when you give one. It is always possible. It can save you from another hard working, giving too much effort or struggling. Sharing information with each other create a new challenge that can improve each side. They can learn new thing that can bring award or help to get next step with their studies in academic world and scientific research when you share information because opponent can give new information too. Moreover, they can be much wealthier by sharing information in business same thing exists here.
To sum up, I think it is good to share information in business, academic world and scientific research. Because it can improve economy, science, quantity and quality of articles etc.
People
are divided
into two groups because of sharing
information
about research, business and the academic
world
.
Some
of them think that it is not good sharing
information
with others and others think reverse of it.

Firstly
, getting
information
is not an easy task.
People
struggled while they were finding new thing which is
very
important
. It is a good result for their works and effort.
Naturally
, they do not want to share this
information
to others. They think others should work, struggled, give too much effort to gain same or like
information
. Result of sharing, bigger rivals can
be born
. It cannot
be said
that they are
wrong
. It is kind of spying in business. They think it is the worst thing ever can
be done
sharing
information
. Most of them want to be the one, without any rival.
Moreover
, they think that their
information
can bring award to someone
else or
they can steal their studies in academic
world
and scientific research.

However
, sharing
information
cannot be
just
about
bad
thing. You can
get
better
information
when you give one. It is always possible. It can save you from another
hard working
, giving too much effort or struggling. Sharing
information
with each other create a new challenge that can
improve
each side. They can learn new thing that can bring award or
help
to
get
next
step with their studies in academic
world
and scientific research when you share
information
because opponent can give new
information
too.
Moreover
, they can be much wealthier by sharing
information
in business same thing exists here.

To sum up, I think it is good to share
information
in business, academic
world
and scientific research. Because it can
improve
economy, science, quantity and quality of articles etc.

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