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concern behind increasing crime rate

There is no doubt the crime rate is flurishing by leaps and bons in every nook and corner of the cosmo. Behind it numbrous of resons which gives pave the way for this notion. In following paragraph I shall discus regarding why it is happning
To embark on it, there are myraid resons which trigre to cometing crime, among tham the leading one is that unemployment, laburing point, for earnig brad and butter people have to do job, however, who cannot get job or any way for livelyhood then they start cometing crime, for exampel, a survey of Cembridge Univarsity reavels that approximentaly 40 percent crimes behind the motive is earnig money. In addition to it, number of time a person compeny give breeding graound for becoming offender.
For solving this probleme, there are myraid thing sould be done for it such as government must leave no stone unturnded for overcome this notion, for instans government should provide more and more jobs also shoud give striacts punishment. Moreover, perantns and teachers are as well playing a vitel roll for solving this phenomenon they can teach there offspring and pupils regarding drowback of cometing crimes
To sum up, it is a praveiling concern for today's genration, government and parents are playing a crucial roll to overcome it.
There is no doubt the crime rate is
flurishing
by leaps and
bons
in every nook and corner of the
cosmo
. Behind it
numbrous
of
resons
which gives pave the way for this notion. In following paragraph I shall
discus
regarding why it is
happning


To embark on it, there are
myraid
resons
which
trigre
to
cometing
crime, among
tham
the leading one is that unemployment,
laburing
point, for
earnig
brad and butter
people
have to
do job,
however
, who cannot
get
job or any way for
livelyhood
then they
start
cometing
crime, for
exampel
, a survey of
Cembridge
Univarsity
reavels
that
approximentaly
40 percent crimes behind the motive is
earnig
money.
In addition
to it, number of time a person
compeny
give breeding
graound
for becoming offender.

For solving this
probleme
, there are
myraid
thing
sould
be done
for it such as government
must
leave
no stone
unturnded
for overcome this notion, for
instans
government should provide more and more jobs
also
shoud
give
striacts
punishment.
Moreover
,
perantns
and teachers are
as well
playing a
vitel
roll for solving this phenomenon they can teach there offspring and pupils regarding
drowback
of
cometing
crimes

To sum up, it is a
praveiling
concern for
today
's
genration
, government and parents are playing a crucial roll to overcome it.

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