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Celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements

people are become celebrities when they become famous showing exceptional talent in their respecitve field. The field can be anything like science, film industry, politics, cooking, sports etc. In recent days, people are becomming more famous because of their glamour or wealth rather than their actual talent. Although this is not true all the times but there are few scenarios happening now a days supporting the issue.
Famous celebraties have the capacity to influence people in which youth occupy the prominent position. Whatever celebrities do they are replicated by their fans. So, celebrities activities must be definetly be postive and motivating in all terms.
Increase of technology in social media, made people to easily connect with others and share their talents. This tremendous rise in technology gave oppurtunity for each and every individual to showcase themselves infront of others and easily gaining followers. But this upliftment trend is misused by many people. Instead of sharing Knowledgable and value things, people are promoting unnceccesary things that might have a negative effect on viewers.
Few people are becoming famous by exposing themselves in a undecent way that may have negative impact on people. Some celebrities as well as common people are showcasing their weath in a public platform that can create demotivation. Even people are shairng their intimate photos of their personal lifes in order to acheive publicity. Above mentioned scenarioes are some of the negative effects that a celebritity can influence.
In conclusion, Even there is a right for everyone to express their talents in any field but still there are some restrictions and ethics to be followed by the celebrities.
people
are become
celebrities when they become famous showing exceptional talent in their
respecitve
field. The field can be anything like science, film industry, politics, cooking, sports etc. In recent days, people are
becomming
more famous
because
of their glamour or wealth
rather
than their actual talent. Although this is not true all the times
but
there are few scenarios happening
now a days
supporting the issue.

Famous
celebraties
have the capacity to influence people in which youth
occupy
the prominent position. Whatever celebrities do they
are replicated
by their fans.
So
, celebrities activities
must
be
definetly
be
postive
and motivating in all terms.

Increase of technology in social media, made people to
easily
connect with others and share their talents. This tremendous rise in technology gave
oppurtunity
for each and every individual to showcase themselves
infront
of others and
easily
gaining followers.
But
this
upliftment
trend
is misused
by
many
people.
Instead
of sharing
Knowledgable
and value things, people are promoting
unnceccesary
things that might have a negative effect on viewers.

Few people are becoming famous by exposing themselves in
a
undecent
way that may have negative impact on people.
Some
celebrities
as well
as common people are showcasing their
weath
in a public platform that can create
demotivation
. Even people are
shairng
their intimate photos of their personal
lifes
in order to
acheive
publicity. Above mentioned
scenarioes
are
some of the
negative effects that a
celebritity
can influence.

In conclusion
, Even there is a right for everyone to express their talents in any field
but
still
there are
some
restrictions and ethics to
be followed
by the celebrities.

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