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Your professor is teaching a class on education. Write a post responding to the professor’s question. In your response you should do the following. • express and support your opinion • make a contribution to the discussion An effective response will contain at least 100 words. You will have 10 minutes to write it.

Your professor is teaching a class on education. Write a post responding to the professor’s question. **In your response you should do the following. ** • express and support your opinion • make a contribution to the discussion An effective response will contain **at least** 100 words. You will have 10 minutes to write it. VR1o6

The topic of playing educational computers games by children has been a subject of extensive discussion in recent years. In my point of view, this way of educating children is inappropriate because children in age of 2 to 8 years old should have a lot of activity, discovering and observing many facts by themselves and by just sitting and playing video games their brain will be lazy and it used to learn everything easily. Then, they do not learn how to find out answers by themselves. For instance, my cousin's child used to work with his mom's phone some hours per day and play educational games but he had not good performance in school because his brain learned to discover answers of every issue easily. Moreover, I concur with Andrew's opinion that children in this specific age should have interaction with others to learn other skills including social skills as well.

The topic of playing educational computers games by children
 has been a subject of extensive discussion in recent years. In my point of view, this way of educating children
 is inappropriate because
children
 in age of 2 to 8 years old
 should have a lot of
 activity, discovering and observing many
 facts by themselves and by just
 sitting and playing video games their brain will be lazy and it used
 to learn everything easily
. Then, they do not learn how to find out answers by themselves. For instance
, my cousin's child used
 to work with his mom's phone some
 hours per day and play educational games but
 he had not good
 performance in school because
 his brain learned to discover answers of every issue easily
. Moreover
, I concur with Andrew's opinion that children
 in this specific age should have interaction with others to learn other skills
 including social skills
as well
. 

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IELTS academic Your professor is teaching a class on education. Write a post responding to the professor’s question. In your response you should do the following. • express and support your opinion • make a contribution to the discussion An effective response will contain at least 100 words. You will have 10 minutes to write it.

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