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You recently met the manager of a new company that started in your city. After the meeting, the manager wrote you a letter offering a job at this company. However, you cannot accept the job offer. Write to the manager.

You recently met the manager of a new company that started in your city. After the meeting, the manager wrote you a letter offering a job at this company. However, you cannot accept the job offer. Write to the manager. aWlLP
Dear Sir, First and foremost, I am satisfied after meeting with you sir because you are down to earth person and provides suggestions were required. It would be excited to work with you, as I am an commerce graduate and having relevant experience in past Chartered Accountant firm in my city. This is a response for a job offer which you have given me through the medium of mail. I am a positive mind person and willing to work under you as you are having ample years of experience in accounting field because you are holding a Charted Accountant company. I am amazed about the handsome salary which you are providing me which includes multiple public holidays like in Diwali. Unfortunately, I could not be able to give green signal to you sir due to my bad experience in past work place. Actually, being a commerce student, I cannot handle bulk cash counting without a counting machine but I am familiar with other work like generating entries in accounting software and office work where ever required and even I take follow up with customers in the absence of my superior person. This is the reason why I do not want to work in the field of accountant field. Apart from all the odds, I will definitely recommend to some of my closes friend who is in the same field and want to work with private firm with good package. Also, I will share the review of your company and about you personality. I apologise for my response, Your faithfully, Yash Pandya
Dear Sir,
First
and foremost, I
am satisfied
after meeting with you sir
because
you are down to earth person and provides suggestions
were required
. It would
be excited
to
work
with you, as I am
an
commerce graduate and having relevant experience in past Chartered Accountant firm in my city. This is a response for a job offer which you have
given
me through the medium of mail. I am a
positive
mind person and willing to
work
under you as you are having ample years of experience in accounting field
because
you are holding a Charted Accountant
company
. I
am amazed
about the handsome salary which you are providing me which includes multiple public holidays like in Diwali. Unfortunately, I could not be able to give green signal to you sir due to my
bad
experience in past
work
place. Actually, being a commerce student, I cannot handle bulk cash counting without a counting machine
but
I am familiar with other
work
like generating entries in accounting software and office
work
where ever required and even I take follow up with customers in the absence of my superior person. This is the reason why I do not want to
work
in the field of accountant field. Apart from all the odds, I will definitely recommend to
some
of my closes friend who is in the same field and want to
work
with private firm with
good
package.
Also
, I will share the review of your
company
and about you personality. I
apologise
for my response,
Your
faithfully
,
Yash
Pandya
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IELTS letter You recently met the manager of a new company that started in your city. After the meeting, the manager wrote you a letter offering a job at this company. However, you cannot accept the job offer. Write to the manager.

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