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why you have chosen State University and your particular major(s), department(s) or program(s).

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State University and I possess a common vision. I, like State University, constantly work to explore the limits of nature by exceeding expectations. Long an amateur scientist, it was this drive that brought me to the University of Texas for its Student Science Training Program in 2013. Up to that point science had been my private past time, one I had yet to explore on anyone else’s terms. My time at UT, however, changed that. Participating for the first time in a full-length research experiment at that level, I felt more alive, more engaged, than I ever had before. Learning the complex dynamics between electromagnetic induction and optics in an attempt to solve one of the holy grails of physics, gravitational-waves, I could not have been more pleased. Thus vindicated, my desire to further formalize my love of science brings me to State University. Thanks to this experience, I know now better than ever that State University is my future, because through it I seek another, permanent, opportunity to follow my passion for science and engineering. In addition to just science, I am drawn to State University for other reasons. I strive to work with the diverse group of people that State University wholeheartedly accommodates – and who also share my mindset. They, like me, are there because State University respects the value of diversity. I know from personal experience that in order to achieve the trust, honesty, and success that State University values, new people are needed to create a respectful environment for these values. I feel that my background as an American Sikh will provide an innovative perspective in the university’s search for knowledge while helping it to develop a basis for future success. And that, truly, is the greatest success I can imagine. This emphasis on diversity can also be found in the variety of specialized departments found at State University. On top of its growing cultural and ethnic diversity, State University is becoming a master at creating a niche for every student. However, this does not isolate students by forcing them to work with only those individuals who follow their specific discipline. Instead, it is the seamless interaction between facilities that allows each department, from engineering to programming, to create a real learning environment that profoundly mimics the real world. Thus, State University is not just the perfect place for me, it is the only place for me. Indeed, having the intellectual keenness to absorb every ounce of knowledge presented through my time in the IB program, I know that I can contribute to State University as it continues to cultivate a scholarly climate that encourages intellectual curiosity. At the Department of Electrical and Computer Engineering at State University, I will be able to do just that. In a department where education and research are intermixed, I can continue to follow the path that towards scientific excellence. Long-mesmerized by hobbies like my work with the FIRST Robotics team, I believe State University would be the best choice to continue to nurture my love for electrical and computer engineering. I have only scratched the surface in this ever evolving field but know that the technological potential is limitless. Likewise, I feel that my time at State University would make my potential similarly limitless.
State
University
and I possess a common vision. I, like
State
University
,
constantly
work
to explore the limits of nature by exceeding expectations. Long an amateur scientist, it was this drive that brought me to the
University
of Texas for its Student
Science
Training Program in 2013. Up to that point
science
had been my private past
time
, one I had
yet
to explore on anyone else’s terms. My
time
at UT,
however
,
changed
that. Participating for the
first
time
in a full-length research experiment at that level, I felt more alive, more engaged, than I ever had
before
. Learning the complex dynamics between electromagnetic induction and optics in an attempt to solve one of the holy
grails
of physics, gravitational-waves, I could not have been more
pleased
.
Thus
vindicated, my desire to
further
formalize my
love
of
science
brings me to
State
University
. Thanks to this experience, I
know
now
better than ever that
State
University
is my future,
because
through
it
I seek another, permanent, opportunity to follow my passion for
science
and engineering.
In addition
to
just
science
, I
am drawn
to
State
University
for other reasons. I strive to
work
with the diverse group of
people
that
State
University
wholeheartedly
accommodates
and who
also
share my mindset. They, like me, are there
because
State
University
respects the value of diversity. I
know
from personal experience that in order to achieve the trust, honesty, and success that
State
University
values, new
people
are needed
to create a respectful environment for these values. I feel that my background as an American Sikh will provide an innovative perspective in the
university’s
search for knowledge while helping it to develop a basis for future success. And that,
truly
, is the greatest success I can imagine. This emphasis on diversity can
also
be found
in the variety of specialized
departments
found at
State
University
. On top of its growing cultural and ethnic diversity,
State
University
is becoming a master at creating a niche for every student.
However
, this does not isolate students by forcing them to
work
with
only
those individuals who follow their specific discipline.
Instead
, it is the seamless interaction between facilities that
allows
each
department
, from engineering to programming, to create a real learning environment that
profoundly
mimics the real world.
Thus
,
State
University
is not
just
the perfect place for me, it is the
only
place for me.
Indeed
, having the intellectual keenness to absorb every ounce of knowledge presented through my
time
in the IB program, I
know
that I can contribute to
State
University
as it continues to cultivate a
scholarly
climate that encourages intellectual curiosity. At the
Department
of Electrical and Computer Engineering at
State
University
, I will be able to do
just
that. In a
department
where education and research
are intermixed
, I can continue to follow the path that towards scientific excellence. Long-mesmerized by hobbies like my
work
with the
FIRST
Robotics team, I believe
State
University
would be the best choice to continue to nurture my
love
for electrical and computer engineering. I have
only
scratched the surface in this ever evolving field
but
know
that the technological potential is limitless.
Likewise
, I feel that my
time
at
State
University
would
make
my potential
similarly
limitless.
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