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Why nowadays people are to expect to live longer thanks to the medical care that has been improving through the years.

Why nowadays people are to expect to live longer thanks to the medical care that has been improving through the years. 0OO
Living longer is what everyone expect nowadays, more time is equal to more experiences. As we get older we know that thanks to the advance technology we expect to live longer than the people before 2000s, As the years go by, new discoveries help treat diseases that were deadly in the past, and thanks to new drugs and treatments the most that can happen is a small cold. Besides all the problems we may have there is always something in the drugstore to make us feel better. In the past a little fever could end in death, but nowadays is easier to get healthy with a simple pill. Is normal that now we get colds but is easy to get rid of those. A good example of how much the Medical technology has advanced to both the level of the COVID pandemic. Exactly 100 years ago there was a pandemic known as the Spanish flu where you could not do anything, if the flu gave you the chances of dying were greater than 90%, the opposite of what the pandemic is today, where nothing else 5% went undercover and the hospital depended a lot on that 5% but little more than half was saved. Much difference thanks to medical advancement. We can now say that thanks to the advance world we live in now we can be sure that this new inventions will still progressing our time in this world it's going to keep going up.
Living longer is what everyone
expect
nowadays, more time is equal to more
experiences
.
As
we
get
older we know that
thanks
to the advance technology we
expect
to
live
longer than the
people
before
2000s, As the years go by, new discoveries
help
treat diseases that were deadly in the past, and
thanks
to new drugs and
treatments
the most that can happen is a
small
cold
.
Besides
all the problems we may have there is always something in the drugstore
to
make
us feel better. In the past a
little
fever could
end
in death,
but
nowadays
is
easier
to
get
healthy with a simple pill. Is normal that
now
we
get
colds
but
is
easy
to
get
rid of those. A
good
example of how much the Medical technology has advanced to both the
level
of the
COVID
pandemic. Exactly 100 years ago there was a pandemic
known
as the Spanish flu where you could not do anything, if the flu gave you the chances of dying were greater than 90%, the opposite of what the pandemic is
today
, where nothing else 5% went undercover and the hospital depended a lot on that 5%
but
little
more than half
was saved
. Much difference
thanks
to medical advancement. We can
now
say that
thanks
to the advance world we
live
in
now
we can be sure that this new inventions will
still
progressing
our time in this world it's going to
keep
going
up.
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