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What motivate you to bridge gap and go beyond the realms of men specifically in the cage?

What motivate you to bridge gap and go beyond the realms of men specifically in the cage? BdP85
I strongly believe that despite what profession one is in, developing a strong network can open door to career opportunities and personal development. Personally, the most effective methods I used for creating and maintaining professional relationships is through the use of social media. After graduating from university, LinkedIn in particular has been a powerful platform that enables me to connect with people who are in my profession and people who are in other professions. Learning and taking advantage of how the LinkedIn Search Engine Optimization (SEO) works has allowed me to draw professionals from all over the world and build meaningful relationships. I’ve been very proactive on LinkedIn, I’ve shared contents in my field, shared my achievements and participated in constructive discussion under post from professional organizations and individuals. These approaches really help me when I meet some of my connections personally, it is easier to initiate conversation based on our previous online discussions. Apart from social media I do love networking events which are face-to-face. For instance, the Information Technology Society of Solomon Islands (ITSSI) events have been a great platform where I was lucky enough to build and grow a lasting relationship. During these events I made every effort to meet everyone in the room and I receive good advice and learned insights into their company and career. Another similar example is through my Volunteering efforts with the Rotaract Club of Honiara. Involving with this young group of people, allows me to network with Rotarians who are mostly owners of some of the big business here in the Solomon Islands. Constructive discussion with them led one of the Rotarian to hire me whenever there is a need for my skillset and another to offer me a Job opportunity.
I
strongly
believe that despite what profession one is in, developing a strong network can open door to career opportunities and personal development.
Personally
, the most effective methods I
used
for creating and maintaining professional relationships is through the
use
of social media. After graduating from university, LinkedIn
in particular
has been a powerful platform that enables me to connect with
people
who are in my profession and
people
who are in other professions. Learning and taking advantage of how the LinkedIn Search Engine Optimization (SEO) works has
allowed
me to draw professionals from all over the world and build meaningful relationships. I’ve been
very
proactive on LinkedIn, I’ve shared contents in my field, shared my achievements and participated in constructive discussion under post from professional organizations and individuals. These approaches
really
help
me when I
meet
some
of my connections
personally
, it is easier to initiate conversation based on our previous online discussions. Apart from social media I do
love
networking
events
which are face-to-face.
For instance
, the Information Technology Society
of Solomon Islands
(
ITSSI
)
events
have been a great platform where I was lucky
enough
to build and grow a lasting relationship. During these
events
I made every effort to
meet
everyone in the room and I receive
good
advice and learned insights into their
company
and career. Another similar example is through my Volunteering efforts with the
Rotaract
Club of Honiara. Involving with this young group of
people
,
allows
me to network with
Rotarians
who are
mostly
owners of
some of the
big
business here in the Solomon Islands. Constructive discussion with them led one of the Rotarian to hire me whenever there is a need for my
skillset
and another to offer me a Job opportunity.
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