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Traditions are about the past and technology about the future and it has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for that sake of the progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this.

Traditions are about the past and technology about the future and it has been argued that we need to let go of traditions for that sake of the progress. with this. x3An6
In the era of 21st century technology has become part and parcel of every flesh and bloods life. Upgrading to the existing technology involves huge substantial cost. In developed countries like USA, Canada etc, government try spending on new and faster means of transport like by constructing new railways etc. Whereas in developing countries like India, Pakistan etc, government should spend more on improving the existing transport. By constructing new lines for railway we will have different benefits such as tourism will increase and people get more employed because government would be spending on development of infrastructure. Over and above the states and zones would be linked, people can travel long distance for work in less time. With new technology there would be faster development as country will be moving along the same lines as the technology. It would also increase the GDP of the country as employment would increase, so will the output of the country will increase. But by spending huge sums of money developing country will increase their own debt and would thus put themselves in hot water. Developing countries existing transport will continue to depreciate as no money is spend on them. The money is diverted towards the construction and maintenance of the new railway. The cost of the new railway will increase and focus on small repair works on existing transport will diminish. If the money is used for the repair works on the existing machines then country could save some money which can be used in other constructive works and this will lead to fuller utilisation of the existing transport. So according to me developing countries must spend their money on developing their existing transport because most of them are already in huge debts from the international bank and this would lead to small saving for the government, which could be utilised in repaying debts or other important activities.
In the era of 21st century
technology
has become part and parcel of every flesh and bloods life. Upgrading to the
existing
technology
involves huge substantial cost. In developed
countries
like USA
, Canada etc,
government
try spending on
new
and faster means of
transport
like by constructing
new
railways
etc. Whereas in
developing
countries
like India, Pakistan etc,
government
should spend more on improving the
existing
transport
. By constructing
new
lines for
railway
we will have
different
benefits such as tourism will
increase
and
people
get
more employed
because
government
would be spending on development of infrastructure. Over and above the states and zones would
be linked
,
people
can travel long distance for
work
in less time. With
new
technology
there would be faster development as
country
will be moving along the same lines as the
technology
. It would
also
increase
the GDP of the
country
as employment would
increase
,
so
will the output of the
country
will
increase
.
But
by spending huge sums of
money
developing
country
will
increase
their
own
debt and would
thus
put themselves in hot water.
Developing
countries
existing
transport
will continue to depreciate as no
money
is
spend
on them. The
money
is diverted
towards the construction and maintenance of the
new
railway
. The cost of the
new
railway
will
increase
and focus on
small
repair works on
existing
transport
will diminish. If the
money
is
used
for the repair works on the
existing
machines then
country
could save
some
money
which can be
used
in other constructive works and this will lead to fuller
utilisation
of the
existing
transport
.
So
according to me
developing
countries
must
spend their
money
on
developing
their
existing
transport
because
most of them are already in huge debts from the international bank and this would lead to
small
saving for the
government
, which could be
utilised
in repaying debts or other
important
activities.
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