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Tourism make people narrow minded

Tourism make people narrow minded WMp50
Undoubtedly tourism is one of the major developments in a nation and to enhance the tourist attractions in a nation government try to install new features. But often it is argued by some masses that tourism make people narrow minded. Following paragraphs would elaborate my views on points which are making people negative. To commence with, cultural differences are one of the major concerns in disputes among people and tourists. To elaborate, sometimes due to different practices in native and other culture people get offended and make a mind set of negative image of other tradition. Moreover, tourist criticise native population to be backward and under development. Due to this, people often make misconceptions about international travellers that they are judgemental and sad negative things about there culture. Moving further, pollution created by travellers on location also make people think about the manners and educational values of them. Fo example, In Africa in a village when large number of garbage was recorded in 2014 due to tourists, native villagers ban tourists to make a visit in there village. Additionally, in many cases people after returning to there country after trips give bad reviews about the place which consequently make a native image of the place all over the media and social platforms. A part from that, clothing style should be a another factor because for many developing countries it is new thing to be bold in fashion sense. So, may be for old thinking people it would be a topic of discussion. To sum up, no doubt tourism boosts the economy of a nation but somehow people often get hurted and somethings can really hurt their sentiments.
Undoubtedly
tourism is one of the major developments in a nation and to enhance the
tourist
attractions in a nation
government
try to install new features.
But
often
it
is argued
by
some
masses that tourism
make
people
narrow minded
. Following paragraphs would elaborate my views on points which are making
people
negative
. To commence with, cultural differences are one of the major concerns in disputes among
people
and
tourists
. To elaborate,
sometimes
due to
different
practices in
native
and other culture
people
get
offended and
make
a mind set of
negative
image of other tradition.
Moreover
,
tourist
criticise
native
population to be backward and under development. Due to this,
people
often
make
misconceptions about international
travellers
that they are
judgemental
and sad
negative
things about there culture. Moving
further
, pollution created by
travellers
on location
also
make
people
think
about the manners and educational values of them.
Fo
example, In Africa in a village when large number of garbage
was recorded
in 2014 due to
tourists
,
native
villagers ban
tourists
to
make
a visit in
there
village.
Additionally
, in
many
cases
people
after returning to there country after trips give
bad
reviews about the place which
consequently
make
a
native
image of the place all over the media and social platforms. A part from that, clothing style should be
a
another factor
because
for
many
developing countries
it
is new
thing to be bold in fashion sense.
So
, may be for
old
thinking
people
it would be a topic of discussion. To sum up, no doubt tourism boosts the economy of a nation
but
somehow
people
often
get
hurted
and somethings can
really
hurt their sentiments.
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