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The luckiest day of my life

The luckiest day of my life V0e06
03. 08. 2021, It was the luckiest day of my life! On this day I was preparing for the Presidential Schools Entering Test in my rented house as usual. Suddenly, the light had turned off. And I supposed that it was a short circuit. But after 5 pm I realized that it was not a small problem. Because generally if a challenge was maken in house, it would have been fixed between 4 hours. Otherwise you could call the House’s Building Company. I did not call the Company because the house was not mine. So I made a decision to wait until the matter was repaired. But after 7 pm the door was knocked by somebody. I did not open the door because of fear. I fantasize he was a thief. And I remembered the horor event which happened when I was 5 years old. “When I was a 5 years old boy, Thieves had been tried to kill me in our house. Because I had seen their crime. The chiefs were disrupted by The Police. And the policeman had returned my life to myself. I was lucky in that event”. And I fainted due to horor. And I woke up from the sound of the broken door. Fortunately, I saw my best friend, Samandar. He said “ While I was coming to my house, I saw your house was dark. And I contemplated something was wrong. And now I am going to invite you to my house. “ And I went to Samandar’s house. And on this day he saved me from fear. It was the luckiest day of my life!
03. 08. 2021, It was the luckiest day of my life! On this day I was preparing for the Presidential Schools Entering
Test
in my rented
house
as usual.
Suddenly
, the light had turned off. And I supposed that it was a short circuit.
But
after 5 pm I realized that it was not a
small
problem.
Because
generally
if a challenge was
maken
in
house
, it would have been
fixed
between 4 hours.
Otherwise
you could call the
House’s
Building
Company
. I did not call the
Company
because
the
house
was not mine.
So
I made a decision to wait until the matter
was repaired
.
But
after 7 pm the door
was knocked
by somebody. I did not open the door
because
of fear. I fantasize he was a thief. And I remembered the
horor
event
which happened when I was 5 years
old
. “When I was a 5 years
old
boy, Thieves had
been tried
to kill me in our
house
.
Because
I had
seen
their crime. The chiefs
were disrupted
by The Police. And the policeman had returned my life to myself. I was lucky in that
event
”. And I fainted due to
horor
. And I woke up from the sound of the broken door.
Fortunately
, I
saw
my best friend,
Samandar
. He said
While I was coming to my
house
, I
saw
your
house
was dark. And I contemplated something was
wrong
. And
now
I am going to invite you to my
house
. “ And I went to
Samandar
’s
house
. And on this day he saved me from fear. It was the luckiest day of my life!
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