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The day when I help a kid

The day when I help a kid X01NA
We all know that children are gift of god. So always should be kind with them. About 10 years ago when I was 19 years old I saw a kid crying beside the road. There are so many people over there but nobody came to help him. It makes me feel so bad. That is why I went to her and ask her what happened. He told me that he lost his mother. After hearing that I felt so pity for him. I ask him his home address his mother name and father name. But it is matter of sorrow that he was very afraid and we could remember anything. The situation got more dangerous when an cunning women claimed the baby of her. But the baby would not want to go with her. So I hit upon a plan and called the police but the cunning lady leave the place suddenly. When police officers came they told me to come police station with them. So that me and the kid went over there. After few moments the police officers found out mother of kid. When the mother came the kid became very happy and hugged her tightly. So lady started crying and thanked me. I told her to be more careful about kids because now a days awful person everywhere.
We all know that children are gift of god.
So
always should be
kind with
them. About 10 years ago when I was 19 years
old
I
saw
a
kid
crying beside the road. There are
so
many
people
over there
but
nobody came to
help
him. It
makes
me feel
so
bad
.
That is
why I went to her and ask her what happened. He
told
me that he lost his
mother
. After hearing that I felt
so
pity for him. I ask him his home address his
mother
name and father name.
But
it is matter of sorrow that he was
very
afraid and
we could remember anything. The situation
got
more
dangerous
when
an
cunning
women
claimed the baby of her.
But
the baby would not want to
go with
her.
So
I hit upon a plan and called the
police
but
the cunning lady
leave
the place
suddenly
.
When
police
officers came they
told
me to
come
police
station with them.
So
that me and the
kid
went over there.
After
few moments the
police
officers found out
mother
of
kid
. When the
mother
came the
kid
became
very
happy and hugged her
tightly
.
So
lady
started
crying and thanked me. I
told
her to be more careful about
kids
because
now a days
awful person everywhere.
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