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Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why?

Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why? 0Keb5
Beggars are the person who begs for money or food in the streets. People have different opinion towards them some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to the beggears, other disagress. In my opinion, we should not give beggars the money. I think of this way because of the two main reasons which i will be exploring on the subsequent paragraphs. Firstly, beggars beg on the street because they dont have any source of income and if we start giving them money they become habituated taking money from others and gets engcouraged on doing so. Regardless, of their capabillity to work and earn money, they depend on us for as their source of income as it will be an easy money for them to earn. Instead of giving money to them i think we should be able to make some arrangement to find them a job. I would like to give my personal exmaple that i have encounter in my life. Last month i walking down the street one teenager came towards me and was asking money. I noticed that he was wearing his school dress and hanging his school card. I asked him why are on street begging instead of going school. he replied me he doen't want to study instead he wants to earn money and begging he can get money easily. later I explained him by education you can get job easily and earn money in futue. Secondly, the crimes are increasing day by day. Some people are kidnapping innocent people and they are forced to beg by those kidnappers and the money. At the end of the day they collect all those money from the beggars. Last week when i visiting my aunt's place early in the moring at 4am few people came to dropped a man on the street his hands were tied he sat whole day begging to the pediatrians and at midnight those strangers came and took all the money from the beggars. It was devastating to see that. Thats why, giving money for those people can increase crime instead w eshould report those cases to the concerned authority. To sum up, In my view giving money to beggars can enourage to contiue their habit to take money from others and that can also increase crime and voilence in bthe society.
Beggars
are the person who begs for
money
or food in the
streets
.
People
have
different
opinion towards them
some
people
suggest that it is
wrong
to give
money
to the
beggears
, other
disagress
. In my opinion, we should not give
beggars
the
money
. I
think
of this way
because
of the two main reasons which
i
will be exploring on the subsequent paragraphs.
Firstly
,
beggars
beg on the
street
because
they
dont
have any source of income and if we
start
giving
them
money
they become habituated taking
money
from others and
gets
engcouraged
on doing
so
. Regardless, of their
capabillity
to work and
earn
money
, they depend on us for as their source of income as it will be an easy
money
for them to
earn
.
Instead
of
giving
money
to
them
i
think
we should be able to
make
some
arrangement to find them a job. I would like to give my personal
exmaple
that
i
have encounter in my life. Last month
i
walking down the
street
one
teenager
came towards me and was asking
money
. I noticed that he was wearing his school dress and hanging his school card. I asked him why are on
street
begging
instead
of going school.
he
replied me he
doen't
want to study
instead
he wants to
earn
money
and begging he can
get
money
easily
.
later
I
explained
him by education you can
get
job
easily
and
earn
money
in
futue
.
Secondly
, the crimes are increasing day by day.
Some
people
are kidnapping innocent
people
and
they
are forced
to beg by those kidnappers and the
money
. At the
end
of the day they collect all those
money
from the
beggars
. Last week when
i
visiting my aunt's place early in the
moring
at 4am few
people
came to
dropped
a
man
on the
street
his hands
were tied
he sat whole day begging to the
pediatrians
and at midnight those strangers came and took all the
money
from the
beggars
. It was devastating to
see
that.
Thats
why,
giving
money
for those
people
can increase crime
instead
w eshould
report those cases to the concerned authority. To sum up, In my view
giving
money
to
beggars
can
enourage
to
contiue
their habit to take
money
from others and that can
also
increase crime and
voilence
in
bthe
society.
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IELTS essay Some people suggest that it is wrong to give money to beggars asking for money on the street, while others think that it is the right thing to do. Which point of view do you think is correct, and why?

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