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Prison is the only truly effective form of punishment, because it separates criminals from society.” To what extent do you support this view? You should give reasons for your answer, and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience

Prison is the only truly effective form of punishment, because it separates criminals from society. ” You should give reasons for your answer, and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience jMnrN
I partially agree with the view that prison is the only truly effective form of punishment, because it separates criminals from society, and in this essay, I will try to back up my point of view with support arguments. People often think that criminals are criminals, therefore they must land themselves in jail for their commitment, which I am in the same opinion as others. Depending on the way of their committed wrongdoing, the person or clan whoever responsible for their act should be sentenced through given jurisdictions, but it varies on damages that results from their criminal act. Humans are naturally born a “free” social animal and freedom is the precious yet basic need for individuals, and getting imprisoned through criminal act is the worst thing that could in human life happen. From here on, my point of view diverting into the tricky version, why people should be kept in jail, because of their bad acts. I can imagine, not every person who committed a so-called criminal act must not be punished through prison as the way of their faults are quite different. I am sure that they have been judged by the size of damage, and risk of repeating their criminal act, however locking them up in a prison will not solve the problem either. For instance, nations are offering psychologist to assist everybody who is vulnerable to awful actions to prevent them to fall in a nasty situation again, but at the end life expectation is the reflecting mirror of each country, if the state couldn’t perform well in terms of education, health and social sectors, the level of criminality remains concerning logically. In a nutshell, a prison sentence for dangerous criminals is undeniable, however not every person, who committed a crime, is deserved longer imprisonment as some of them might be just a victim of the incorrect social arrangements, or self-protection. Therefore, I am in the opinion that jail sentence is the not only effective method to eliminate the criminality rate.
I
partially
agree
with the view that
prison
is the
only
truly
effective form of punishment,
because
it separates
criminals
from society, and in this essay, I will try to back up my point of view with support arguments.
People
often
think
that
criminals
are
criminals
,
therefore
they
must
land themselves in jail for their commitment, which I am in the same opinion as others. Depending on the way of their committed wrongdoing, the person or clan whoever responsible for their
act
should
be sentenced
through
given
jurisdictions,
but
it varies on damages that results from their
criminal
act
. Humans are
naturally
born a “free” social animal and freedom is the precious
yet
basic need for individuals, and getting imprisoned through
criminal
act
is the worst thing that could in human life happen. From here on, my point of view diverting into the tricky version, why
people
should be
kept
in jail,
because
of their
bad
acts. I can imagine, not every person who committed a
so
-called
criminal
act
must
not
be punished
through
prison
as the way of their faults are quite
different
. I am sure that they have
been judged
by the size of damage, and
risk
of repeating their
criminal
act
,
however
locking them up in a
prison
will not solve the problem either.
For instance
, nations are offering psychologist to assist everybody who is vulnerable to awful actions to
prevent
them to fall in a nasty situation again,
but
at the
end
life expectation is the reflecting mirror of each country, if the state couldn’t perform well in terms of education, health and social sectors, the level of criminality remains concerning
logically
. In a nutshell, a
prison
sentence for
dangerous
criminals
is undeniable,
however
not every person, who committed a crime,
is deserved
longer imprisonment as
some
of them might be
just
a victim of the incorrect social arrangements, or self-protection.
Therefore
, I am in the opinion that jail sentence is the not
only
effective method to eliminate the criminality rate.
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