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Please explaine about aspects of pollution in modern nations.

Please explaine about aspects of pollution in modern nations. ByKmV

The modern economics rely on their idustry and this relation between them make some of problems in that countries such as: First, air pollution made by released emission from vehicle's exhaus and factories, is very dangerous for sensetive group of people who lives in that area for example olds and infants Second, water pollution is a problomatic issue in this countries and this water can find a way to pollute food cycle and affect on persons by making gastero intestinal disease such as Cholrea and so on. Third, every kind of products has consumed oil and energy, And for providing this we need to use our natural source more and more, however we have not other chioce and should be finded a replaced material to avoid this problem. As conclusion, if we change our view to industry and find a green source for our energy consumers, maybe it relives this occasion and remain a good gift for our next generations for instance a pure Earth.

The modern economics rely on their idustry
 and this relation between them make
some of problems
 in that countries such as:

First
, air pollution made by released emission from vehicle's exhaus
 and factories, is very
dangerous
 for sensetive
 group of people
 who lives
 in that area for example
 olds and infants
Second, water pollution is a problomatic
 issue in this
 countries and this water can find a way to pollute food cycle and affect
 on persons by making gastero
 intestinal disease such as Cholrea
 and so
 on.

Third, every kind of products has consumed oil and energy, And for providing this we need to use
 our natural source more and more, however
 we have not other chioce
 and should be finded
 a replaced material to avoid this problem.

As conclusion, if we change
 our view to industry and find a green source for our energy consumers, maybe it relives this occasion and remain a good
 gift for our next
 generations for instance
 a pure Earth. 

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