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Please describe a current problem in Myanmar and how you can help solve it

Please describe a current problem in Myanmar and how you can help solve it 20XWw
To my mind, the procedures and constitutions of our human rights and communities especially associated with foreign affair depend on international relations in many particular ways. It is clear the longer you explore, the more you will analyze how much does the international relation have positive impact on our world. Personally, I would love to devote my time studying the concepts of developing our environments in order to put what I have learnt into practice productively. Apparently, there has been a significant money inflation in my country that is not considered to be going down since the beginning of dictation crisis. There are a ton of national obstacles and political problems which have led to happen current situations. Among them, one of the major issue came out of my mind is the decline of tourism and going abroad had been kept down the number of airports and set up stricter rules and requirements. Besides, there are some run-down buildings in the cities which are supposed to be tourist attractions to maintain the economy cycle of our country. Regardless of progressive deteriorating in currency, urban development, educational section and any other respective aspects, no one has ever appeared to regain the original state unless the crisis is over. So, if I am going to take the 4 years course of international relation, the hardship will have ended completely by the time I have graduated. Subsequently, as soon as I come back to my hometown, I will probably involve in regenerating and restoring the demolished features of the cities which will turn out remarkable places with high level of urban developments. On the contrary, our urban developments are not as improve and upgrade as other countries. Therefore, my first step for that concern is to phase out trivia substances and then phase in a bunch of advance technology facilities. Otherwise, I can assure that I will be engaging in foreign affair, analysis of crisis, educational institutions, human rights and diplomat career aspects to escalate fundamental progress of our nation. Furthermore, there will possibly be a group of people who will be working on the same thing as I mentioned when I get back to my country. On the bright side, I would like to cooperate with teams as it has potential to gain their perspective from the intimacies. All things consider, there is no doubt the schemes and solutions what I exposed are able to sustain the international relations and enhance the image of my country.
To my mind, the procedures and constitutions of our human rights and communities
especially
associated with foreign affair depend on
international
relations
in
many
particular ways. It is
clear
the longer you explore, the more you will analyze how much does the
international
relation
have
positive
impact on our world.
Personally
, I would
love
to devote my time studying the concepts of developing our environments in order to put what I have
learnt
into practice
productively
.
Apparently
, there has been a significant money inflation in my
country
that is
not considered to be going down since the beginning of dictation crisis. There are a ton of national obstacles and political problems which have led to happen
current
situations. Among them, one of the major issue came out of my mind is the decline of tourism and going abroad had been
kept
down the number of airports and set up stricter
rules
and requirements.
Besides
, there are
some
run-down buildings in the cities which
are supposed
to be tourist attractions to maintain the economy cycle of our
country
. Regardless of progressive deteriorating in currency, urban development, educational section and any other respective aspects, no one has ever appeared to regain the original state unless the crisis is over.
So
, if I am going to take the 4 years course of
international
relation
, the hardship will have ended completely by the time I have graduated.
Subsequently
, as
soon
as I
come
back to my hometown, I will
probably
involve in regenerating and restoring the demolished features of the cities which will turn out remarkable places with high level of urban developments.
On the contrary
, our urban developments are not as
improve
and upgrade as other
countries
.
Therefore
, my
first
step for that concern is to phase out trivia substances and then phase in a bunch of advance technology facilities.
Otherwise
, I can assure that I will be engaging in foreign affair, analysis of crisis, educational institutions, human rights and diplomat career aspects to escalate fundamental progress of our nation.
Furthermore
, there will
possibly
be a group of
people
who will be working on the same thing as I mentioned when I
get
back to my
country
. On the bright side, I would like to cooperate with teams as it has potential to gain their perspective from the intimacies. All things consider, there is no doubt the schemes and solutions what I exposed are able to sustain the
international
relations
and enhance the image of my
country
.
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