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Over the past fifty years, international sports events such as the Olympic Games and world cup competitions have played an increasingly important role in our society. However, many people think such events are an enormous waste of money, time and effort. Do you agree?

Over the past fifty years, international sports events such as the Olympic Games and world cup competitions have played an increasingly important role in our society. However, many people think such events are an enormous waste of money, time and effort. Do you agree? NdgAj
In sports mens and womens personalities are playing a huge role towards the society over many years. As they are so harding working to achieve and showcase there talent to world different level, while some believe that it is a total waste of money and time consuming. I disagree with the statement and will elborate opinion in following paragraphs. To begin, We all know that sport persons are so hard working and they have inner talent such developed skills, knowledge, leadership etc. While competing at different levels such as district, state, national and then at international which the highest position for any sport individual. For example, Mary kom who is an inspiration become world champion for many times and represented india at olympics as well as many internationals levels. We all know that there is huge competitions between players of different countries in different games to make sure that those winners are making there nations proud. Furthermore, While sport events are most important for players as well as for countries too, who are participating and acknowledging sports in their country. While watching at television or in other media's small childrens and younger ones get more knowledge about sports. Olympic games and world cup competitions are the two main events of the world it showcase their talent on field and defeat one another by making their country proud. I think that it is an waste of time but it is an honourship in the field of sports. While concluding that, Every single money and time spent in those events are an achievement for all person who make it possible. So, we should have to stop thinking as negative side and encourage new upbringing people.
In
sports
mens and womens personalities are playing a huge role towards the society over
many
years. As they are
so
harding working to achieve and showcase there talent to
world
different
level, while
some
believe that it is a total waste of money and
time
consuming. I disagree with the statement and will elborate opinion in following paragraphs. To
begin
, We all know that
sport
persons are
so
hard
working and they have inner talent such developed
skills
, knowledge, leadership etc. While competing at
different
levels such as district, state, national and then at international which the highest position for any
sport
individual.
For example
, Mary kom who is an inspiration become
world
champion for
many
times
and represented india at olympics
as well
as
many
internationals levels. We all know that there is huge competitions between players of
different
countries
in
different
games to
make
sure that those winners are making there nations proud.
Furthermore
, While
sport
events
are most
important
for players
as well
as for
countries
too, who are participating and acknowledging
sports
in their
country
. While watching at television or in other media's
small
childrens and younger ones
get
more knowledge about
sports
. Olympic games and
world
cup competitions are the two main
events
of the
world
it showcase their talent on field and defeat one another by making their
country
proud. I
think
that it is an waste of
time
but
it is an honourship in the field of sports. While concluding that, Every single money and
time
spent in those
events
are an achievement for all person who
make
it possible.
So
, we should
have to
stop
thinking as
negative
side and encourage new upbringing
people
.
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IELTS essay Over the past fifty years, international sports events such as the Olympic Games and world cup competitions have played an increasingly important role in our society. However, many people think such events are an enormous waste of money, time and effort. Do you agree?

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