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On the ninth anniversary of the chemical massacre, reconciliation means suicide

On the ninth anniversary of the chemical massacre, reconciliation means suicide 8KodB
In August 2022, many official statements by the Turkish Foreign Minister were repeated, which indicated a new approach in Turkish policy towards the Syrian situation. The reports noted the need to start talks between the Assad regime and the Syrian opposition to reach a standard solution to the Syrian problem. The Syrians received these statements with a lot of anxiety and fear. Many protests took place in northwest Syria, which indicated the Syrians’ rejection of any form of reconciliation with the Syrian regime and showed their demands for any proposed political solution must adhere to Security Council resolution 2254. The Syrians recalled many crimes committed against them by the Assad regime, especially war crimes, such as using chemical weapons, while one of the largest chemical crimes coincided with these statements. Nine years after the documented chemical crime 9 years ago, The Assad regime attacked the opposition areas in the Rif-Damascus Governorate, with 8 -12 rockets fell on Zemelka and Ein Tarma neighborhoods in eastern Ghouta launched from Mount Qasioun, and at least 7 fell on Moadamiya in western Ghouta launched from Mezzeh military airport. The attacks happened between 01: 20 and 02: 40 am, using 330 mm surface-to-surface rockets, each capable of carrying 50-60 liters of chemical agent. These types of weapons were possessed only by the Syrian regime. Thousands of civilians had suffered from many symptoms consistent with exposure to sarin gas such as: foaming at the mouth; yellowed and bluish skin; convulsions; frozen and pinpoint pupils; itching; blurred vision; hallucinations; vomiting; loss of consciousness; and difficulty breathing, in addition to the Long-term effects of the attacks include lasting physical impacts and psychological trauma Despite all the international statements and condemnation, the absence of decisive action was a green light that allowed the Assad regime to repeat over 336 attacks with chemical weapons between December 2012 and May 2019, 140 attacks targeted the Rif Dimashq Governorate, 53 attacks targeted Aleppo, 52 attacks targeted Hama, and 46 attacks targeted Idlib, according to the Berlin-based Global Public Policy Institute GPPI. These attacks caused at least 1961 deaths, and 18, 790 injuries, due to exposure to chlorine, sarin, and sulfur mustard gazes, 71% of them (1400 civilians) were killed in a few hours when the Ghouta attacks happened in August 2013. The use of chemical weapons was a part of a grand strategy that involved sieges and barrel bombs, it focused on causing maximum casualties, terrorizing civilians, and making peaceful civilian life impossible in opposition areas. International Efforts In September 2013, the Security Council issued "Resolution 2118" related to Syrian chemical weapons used by the Syrian regime in Eastern Ghouta on August 21, 2013. The resolution notes that the use of chemical weapons constitutes a threat to international peace and security and provides for establishing a committee to oversee the dismantling of the Syrian Arab Republic's chemical weapons program, subjecting it to strict verification as soon as possible. As a result of the OPCW-UN Joint Mission, in cooperation with the Syrian government, all chemical weapons declared by Syria were removed and destroyed outside of Syrian territory, but in 2014, new questions arose regarding the completeness and correctness of the Syrian regime’s initial declaration, and after 2 years the Declaration Assessment Team DAP reported that it could not thoroughly verify that Syria’s declaration could be considered accurate and complete. The FFM's findings were the basis for the work of the OPCW-UN Joint Investigative Mechanism (JIM), and many reports, concluded that chemical weapons were very likely used in many places by the Syrian Armed Forces were responsible, and The COI issued shows the Government of Syria responsible for 22 attacks. Russia has used veto 17 times at the Security Council to block action targeting its Syrian ally, and Russian and Syrian officials consistently offered "alternative explanations" for the results of the regime's chemical attacks and tried to question the credibility of the OPCW reports. Reconciliation now means death Chemical weapons are considered one of the most Syrian regime crimes that have received international attention and follow-up. Dozens of reports and documents have been submitted about it, and it has been closely monitored and evaluated. Unfortunately, these efforts have not yielded any results yet, and those involved in this crime did not been held, the Syrian civilians didn't been protected, and the chemical attacks recurring dozens of times. On the contrary, the efforts by some countries have recently begun to normalize with the Assad regime, seek to have international acceptance, evade the political decisions, and convince the Syrians that there is no solution but reconciliation with this criminal regime. The Syrians know well the dexterity of the Syrian regime and its allies, Russia and Iran, in playing on the political margins and making gains. They remember well that the Assad regime has not adhered to any agreement or resolution that it agreed upon, starting with the de-escalation agreements in 2017 to the Russian-Turkish Astana agreement in 2020, where the Assad regime and Russia are still bombing civilians. They cause the dead and wounded. The Syrians also remember how the Assad regime circumvented many of the agreements guaranteed by its Russian ally, it arrested many civilians and activists in the areas of reconciliation and put a lot of pressure and a policy of collective punishment against those who agreed to carry out reconciliation to ensure that they would not leave their land. The file on the chemical crimes of the Assad regime is one of the dozens of files of violations and other crimes committed by this regime, which the Syrians are trying to remember and remind the world of. These crimes have confirmed clearly that this regime is not reformable and cannot be dealt with as a legitimate regime, as it is a dangerous regime that can generate many problems and crosses all red lines with it. Therefore, any unilateral political steps or attempts to resolve the Syrian crisis without international adoption is nothing but a suicide attempt to death. Without launching the transitional justice process, holding those involved accountable, and offering Syrians real guarantees of real political change can’t convince Syrians, They would rather die drowning at sea or freezing in the forest during the asylum journey than return under the rule of these criminals
In August 2022,
many
official statements by the Turkish Foreign Minister
were repeated
, which indicated a new approach in Turkish policy towards the Syrian situation. The reports noted the need to
start
talks between the Assad
regime
and the Syrian opposition to reach a standard solution to the Syrian problem. The Syrians received these statements with
a lot of
anxiety and fear.
Many
protests took place in northwest Syria, which indicated the Syrians’ rejection of any form of
reconciliation
with the Syrian
regime
and
showed
their demands for any proposed political solution
must
adhere to
Security
Council
resolution
2254. The Syrians recalled
many
crimes
committed against them by the Assad
regime
,
especially
war
crimes
, such as using
chemical
weapons
, while one of the largest
chemical
crimes
coincided with these statements. Nine years after the documented
chemical
crime 9
years ago, The Assad
regime
attacked the opposition areas in the Rif-Damascus Governorate, with 8 -12 rockets fell on Zemelka and Ein Tarma neighborhoods in eastern Ghouta launched from Mount Qasioun, and at least 7 fell on Moadamiya in western Ghouta launched from Mezzeh military airport. The
attacks
happened between 01: 20 and 02: 40 am, using 330 mm surface-to-surface rockets, each capable of carrying 50-60 liters of
chemical
agent. These types of
weapons
were possessed
only
by the Syrian regime. Thousands of
civilians
had suffered from
many
symptoms consistent with exposure to sarin gas such as: foaming at the mouth; yellowed and bluish skin; convulsions; frozen and pinpoint pupils; itching; blurred vision; hallucinations; vomiting; loss of consciousness; and difficulty breathing,
in addition
to the Long-term effects of the
attacks
include lasting physical impacts and psychological trauma Despite all the
international
statements and condemnation, the absence of decisive action was a green light that
allowed
the Assad
regime
to repeat over 336
attacks
with
chemical
weapons
between December 2012 and May 2019, 140
attacks
targeted
the Rif Dimashq Governorate, 53
attacks
targeted
Aleppo, 52
attacks
targeted
Hama, and 46
attacks
targeted
Idlib, according to the Berlin-based Global Public Policy Institute GPPI. These
attacks
caused at least 1961 deaths, and 18, 790 injuries, due to exposure to chlorine, sarin, and sulfur mustard gazes, 71% of them (1400
civilians)
were killed
in a few hours when the Ghouta
attacks
happened in August 2013. The
use
of
chemical
weapons
was a part of a grand strategy that involved sieges and barrel bombs, it focused on causing maximum casualties, terrorizing
civilians
, and making peaceful
civilian
life impossible in opposition areas. International Efforts In September 2013, the
Security
Council issued
"Resolution
2118" related to Syrian
chemical
weapons
used
by the Syrian
regime
in Eastern Ghouta on August 21, 2013. The
resolution
notes that the
use
of
chemical
weapons
constitutes a threat to
international
peace and
security
and provides for establishing a committee to oversee the dismantling of the Syrian Arab Republic's
chemical
weapons
program, subjecting it to strict verification as
soon
as possible.
As a result
of the OPCW-UN Joint Mission, in cooperation with the Syrian
government
, all
chemical
weapons
declared by Syria
were removed
and
destroyed
outside of Syrian territory,
but
in 2014, new questions arose regarding the completeness and correctness of the Syrian
regime’s
initial declaration, and after 2 years the Declaration Assessment Team DAP reported that it could not
thoroughly
verify that Syria’s declaration could
be considered
accurate and complete. The FFM's findings were the basis for the work of the OPCW-UN Joint Investigative Mechanism (JIM), and
many
reports, concluded that
chemical
weapons
were
very
likely
used
in
many
places by the Syrian Armed Forces were responsible, and The COI issued
shows
the
Government
of Syria responsible for 22 attacks. Russia has
used
veto 17 times at the
Security
Council to block action targeting its Syrian ally, and Russian and Syrian officials
consistently
offered "alternative explanations" for the results of the regime's
chemical
attacks
and tried to question the credibility of the OPCW reports. Reconciliation
now
means death Chemical
weapons
are considered
one of the most Syrian
regime
crimes
that have received
international
attention and follow-up. Dozens of reports and documents have
been submitted
about it, and it has been
closely
monitored and evaluated. Unfortunately, these efforts have not yielded any results
yet
, and those involved in this
crime
did not
been held
, the Syrian
civilians
didn't
been protected
, and the
chemical
attacks
recurring dozens of times.
On the contrary
, the efforts by
some
countries have recently begun to normalize with the Assad
regime
, seek to have
international
acceptance, evade the political decisions, and convince the Syrians that there is no solution
but
reconciliation
with this criminal regime. The Syrians know well the dexterity of the Syrian
regime
and its allies, Russia and Iran, in playing on the political margins and making gains. They remember well that the Assad
regime
has not adhered to any
agreement
or
resolution
that it
agreed
upon, starting with the de-escalation
agreements
in 2017 to the Russian-Turkish Astana
agreement
in 2020, where the Assad
regime
and Russia are
still
bombing
civilians
. They cause the dead and wounded. The Syrians
also
remember how the Assad
regime
circumvented
many
of the
agreements
guaranteed by its Russian ally, it arrested
many
civilians
and activists in the areas of
reconciliation
and put
a lot of
pressure and a policy of collective punishment against those who
agreed
to carry out
reconciliation
to ensure that they would not
leave
their land. The file on the
chemical
crimes
of the Assad
regime
is one of the dozens of files of violations and other
crimes
committed by this
regime
, which the Syrians are trying to remember and remind the world of. These
crimes
have confirmed
clearly
that this
regime
is not reformable and cannot
be dealt
with as a legitimate
regime
, as it is a
dangerous
regime
that can generate
many
problems and crosses all red lines with it.
Therefore
, any unilateral political steps or attempts to resolve the Syrian crisis without
international
adoption is nothing
but
a suicide attempt to death. Without launching the transitional justice process, holding those involved accountable, and offering Syrians real guarantees of real political
change
can’t convince Syrians, They would
rather
die
drowning at sea or freezing in the forest during the asylum journey than return under the
rule
of these criminals
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