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My Educational Background and my self

My Educational Background and my self LqB2K
I am grateful for getting such a great chance to describe myself through this essay. In this essay, I would like to share about myself including about my family, educational background, jobs I have done, the way of supporting myself and from my family and then about how I came to be where I am now if I have left myanmar. Firstly, my name is Zar Chi Lin, 20 years old and the youngest child in my family. I have one elder brother and one elder sister. My father is from Landkho township, in the Shan State of eastern Burma and my mother is from Bokpyin township of Kawthaung District so we lived in both of the two town when I was young. But after my father retired from his job, there was no one in my family who got income and for this reason, my parents decided to do their own business for us to live and also to support my grandparents. So, they moved to Shwe Pay Village, Myeik, Myanmar, where we currently live and started running a small grocery as a family business. Unfortunately, my parents got a lot of debts instead of income because of an excess of expenditure over income. My parents had struggled a lot of difficulties till we became adult. As I have witnessed the hardships of my parents during these years, I became more mature than people of my ages. I always wanted to be outstanding student when I was young so I concentrated a lot on my studying. As a result, I passed the matriculation exam in 2017 with 4 distinctions, a total score of 482 marks from Kan Zun Ahin Private High School, Myeik, Myanmar. And I studied at the Yangon University of Economics(Hlaing) majoring in Development Studies with partial scholarship that was awarded to the students with great results in Great-10 so my parents didn’t need to support much to me. During the two years of study, I did research proposal about sustainable development goals for our country with my friends and also did volunteer at job fair which was held in my university. And I also involved in many charity programs to support the people like me who need financial and mental aid. Besides, I did online shop and part-time job to make money and during long school holidays, I worked at our shop and also sold the products from our shop through online so I can make money more for my parents. Unfortunately, Covid -19 appeared and my learning stopped. My family business also declined. However, I didn’t stop my learning and attended research training, I founded Mediskilltion Organization with my teammates who did this project with me and we tried our best to promote about meditation habits to public. I also have been working at Serenity Counseling Service and now we are doing a project in collaboration with ActionAid Myanmar to share mental health awareness to the public. I got great experiences and lovely teammates from all of my jobs. I like to work with them but I shouldn’t be like that always. I should make changes and learn new things that will benefit my country. So I decided to study abroad and found Child’s Dream Scholarship which meets all of my needs. So I started trying to collect the documents requested for scholarship application and researched about the university I want to attend. As I didn’t have any English Proficiency Certificate, I took IELTS exam immediately just after studying it about one month. And I studied a lot to sit university entrance exam so that I can get acceptance from the university I want to attend. Actually, I really need this scholarship for my studying so I have tried that much. I chose to study abroad but my parents can’t support me at all as they still have their problems and I understand their situation. So, I am trying my best to get scholarship and so if I were there studying abroad, I came there because of getting the scholarship and the acceptance letter from the university I applied. All the facts that I mentioned above are all about myself and my life. That’s all. Thank you.
I am grateful for getting such a
great
chance to
describe
myself through this essay. In this essay, I would like to share about myself including about my
family
, educational background,
jobs
I have done, the way of supporting myself and from my
family
and then about how I came to be where I am
now
if I have
left
myanmar
.
Firstly
, my name is
Zar
Chi Lin, 20 years
old
and the youngest child in my
family
. I have one elder brother and one elder sister. My father is from
Landkho
township, in the Shan State of eastern Burma and my mother is from
Bokpyin
township of
Kawthaung
District
so
we
lived
in both of the two town when I was young.
But
after my father retired from his
job
, there was no one in my
family
who
got
income and
for this reason
, my
parents
decided to do their
own
business for us to
live
and
also
to
support
my grandparents.
So
, they
moved
to
Shwe
Pay Village,
Myeik
, Myanmar, where we
currently
live
and
started
running a
small
grocery as a
family
business. Unfortunately, my
parents
got
a
lot
of debts
instead
of income
because
of an excess of expenditure over income. My
parents
had struggled a
lot
of difficulties till we became adult. As I have witnessed the hardships of my
parents
during these years, I became more mature than
people
of my ages. I always wanted to be outstanding student when I was young
so
I concentrated a
lot
on my
studying
.
As a result
, I passed the matriculation exam in 2017 with 4 distinctions, a total score of 482 marks from Kan
Zun
Ahin
Private High School,
Myeik
, Myanmar. And I studied at the Yangon
University
of Economics(
Hlaing
) majoring in Development
Studies
with partial
scholarship
that
was awarded
to the students with
great
results in
Great-10
so
my
parents
didn’t
need
to
support
much to me. During the two years of
study
, I did research proposal about sustainable development goals for our country with my friends and
also
did volunteer at
job
fair
which
was held
in my
university
. And I
also
involved in
many
charity programs to
support
the
people
like me who
need
financial and mental aid.
Besides
, I did online shop and part-time
job
to
make
money and during long school holidays, I worked at our shop and
also
sold the products from our shop through online
so
I can
make
money more for my
parents
. Unfortunately,
Covid
-19 appeared and my learning
stopped
. My
family
business
also
declined.
However
, I didn’t
stop
my learning and attended research training, I founded
Mediskilltion
Organization with my teammates who did this project with
me and
we tried our best to promote about meditation habits to public. I
also
have been working at Serenity Counseling Service and
now
we are doing a project in collaboration with
ActionAid
Myanmar to share mental health awareness to the public. I
got
great
experiences and lovely teammates from all of my
jobs
.
I
like to work with them
but
I shouldn’t be like that
always
.
I
should
make
changes
and learn new things that will benefit my country.
So
I decided to
study
abroad and found Child’s Dream
Scholarship
which meets all of my
needs
.
So
I
started
trying to collect the documents requested for
scholarship
application and researched about the
university
I want to attend. As I didn’t have any English Proficiency Certificate, I took IELTS exam immediately
just
after
studying
it about one month. And I studied a
lot
to sit
university
entrance exam
so
that I can
get
acceptance from the
university
I want to attend. Actually, I
really
need
this
scholarship
for my
studying
so
I have tried that much. I chose to
study
abroad
but
my
parents
can’t
support
me at all as they
still
have their problems and I understand their situation.
So
, I am trying my best to
get
scholarship
and
so
if I were there
studying
abroad, I came there
because
of getting the
scholarship
and the acceptance letter from the
university
I applied. All the facts that I mentioned above are all about myself and my life. That’s all. Thank you.
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