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many people believe that the increased presence of violence in films and television these days is responsible for the rising incidents of violent crimes among youths in society. they argue that governments have a duty to control the media so as to reduce this phenomenon. do you agree with this argument?

many people believe that the increased presence of violence in films and television these days is responsible for the rising incidents of violent crimes among youths in society. they argue that governments have a duty to control the media so as to reduce this phenomenon. do you agree with this argument? g1ymg
The amount of brutality on tv and social media worries our population that this cruelty reflected on our society might be the cause for criminal activity increase. For these activities to decline, people defend the idea of the authorities to take a step towards jurisdiction. Media is a powerful force to be feared these days because it can bring happiness and a downfall equally and most of the time, we don’t know which one it will be. It can be called a digital weapon even, with the increasing cyber bullying and brutality in social media, the tv has many different shows that give ideas and views to a new kind of sympathy towards sadism. We don’t dread the bad guy anymore, we thrive to be the bad guy. The idea of the hero is in the past with a dusty blanket on it and guns with bad laughs are in trend novadays. It is the new norm of the coolness, at least, thats what the channels seem to want us to believe in. With the already existing violence in our culture bringing more ferocity to our entarteinment consummation, theres an unintentional push towards brutality in the channels. So, what can we do about this problem as a community? Violence has always been a problem to be solved in different societies for decades. Media and movie sectors are to be blamed to some extend for the increase of it over the last years, although ferocity is an instinct that is far too deeply engraved in human nature to be decreased by management. Still, in my opinion, the ruling regime has a responsibility to restore peace and protect the society from roughness. The reason we have a functional civilization is that we are able to think and bring a new way to look at the situation at hand. The structure of this population is the main reason of comfortable life and the people who rule us are to make a move on the cancellation of different kinds of sadism that we receive from tv and phones. In conclusion, the savagery we have to decrease is a big problem and it should be adressed by authorities. As a civilization, we give the power of control to the regime so it is only natural that we expect a service from it.
The amount of brutality on
tv
and social media worries our population that this cruelty reflected on our society might be the cause for criminal activity increase. For these activities to decline,
people
defend the
idea
of the authorities to take a step towards jurisdiction. Media is a powerful force to
be feared
these days
because
it can bring happiness and a downfall
equally
and most of the time, we don’t know which one it will be. It can
be called
a digital weapon even, with the increasing
cyber bullying
and brutality in social media, the
tv
has
many
different
shows
that give
ideas
and views to a new kind of sympathy towards sadism. We don’t dread the
bad
guy anymore, we thrive to be the
bad
guy. The
idea
of the hero is in the past with a dusty blanket on it and guns with
bad
laughs are in trend
novadays
. It is the new norm of the coolness, at least,
thats
what the channels seem to want us to believe in. With the already existing violence in our culture bringing more ferocity to our
entarteinment
consummation,
theres
an unintentional push towards brutality in the channels.
So
, what can we do about this problem as a community? Violence has always been a problem to
be solved
in
different
societies for decades. Media and movie sectors are to
be blamed
to
some
extend
for the increase of it over the last years, although ferocity is an instinct
that is
far too
deeply
engraved in human nature to
be decreased
by management.
Still
, in my opinion, the ruling regime has a responsibility to restore peace and protect the society from roughness. The reason we have a functional civilization is that we are able to
think
and bring a new way to look at the situation at hand. The structure of this population is the main reason of comfortable life and the
people
who
rule
us are to
make
a
move
on the cancellation of
different
kinds of sadism that we receive from
tv
and phones.
In conclusion
, the savagery we
have to
decrease is a
big
problem and it should be
adressed
by authorities. As a civilization, we give the power of control to the regime
so
it is
only
natural that we
expect
a service from it.
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IELTS essay many people believe that the increased presence of violence in films and television these days is responsible for the rising incidents of violent crimes among youths in society. they argue that governments have a duty to control the media so as to reduce this phenomenon. do you agree with this argument?

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