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It is generally believed that come people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and other are not. However, it is sometimes obtained that any child can be taught to become a good sports person, musicain.

It is generally believed that come people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and other are not. However, it is sometimes obtained that any child can be taught to become a good sports person, musicain. ry01L
It is often argued by some people that talents seems to be attained by birth whereas few opine that hardwork is the only method through which individuals can teach to the greatest height. This essay closely scrutinizes the rationality behind both arguments before reaching a reasonable conclusion. It is true that hardworking could lead towards a successful career of a perosn in the sense that, achieving a dream of becoming good sports personel seems to be difficult as it requires continuos practitce and dedication futhermore, huge amount of money on diet, training seems to be essentail for instance, 40% of population of Nepal are observes to be talking part in sports in which only 10% are able to participate in national levels. Conversely, some believe that few people are born with inherited talents I mean to say, some people posses a quick learning ability where they require less efforts in order to learn a new thing. Perhaps, the best possible example would be Lionel Messi who was born with natural talents and become successful through his continuous hardwork and dedication. In conclusion, the aforementioned points cleary show that talents is one of the factor by which anyone can complete their goals from my prospectives hardwork and dedication are the two main foundation for becoming successful
It is
often
argued by
some
people
that
talents
seems to
be attained
by birth whereas few opine that
hardwork
is the
only
method through which individuals can teach to the greatest height. This essay
closely
scrutinizes the rationality behind both arguments
before
reaching a reasonable conclusion. It is true that hardworking could lead towards a successful career of a
perosn
in the sense that, achieving a dream of becoming
good
sports
personel
seems to be difficult as it requires
continuos
practitce
and dedication
futhermore
, huge amount of money on diet, training seems to be
essentail
for instance
, 40% of population of Nepal are observes to be talking part in sports in which
only
10% are able to participate in national levels.
Conversely
,
some
believe that few
people
are born
with inherited
talents
I mean to say,
some
people
posses a quick learning ability where they require
less
efforts in order to learn a new thing. Perhaps, the best possible example would be Lionel Messi who
was born
with natural
talents
and become successful through his continuous
hardwork
and dedication.
In conclusion
, the aforementioned points
cleary
show
that
talents
is one of the factor by which anyone can complete their goals from my
prospectives
hardwork
and dedication are the two main foundation for becoming
successful
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IELTS academic It is generally believed that come people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and other are not. However, it is sometimes obtained that any child can be taught to become a good sports person, musicain.

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