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'In some countries, there is a growing trend of people moving away from rural areas to live in urban areas. What are the reasons for this trend, and do you think it has more positive or negative effects on individuals and society? Support your opinion with reasons and examples.'

'In some countries, there is a growing trend of people moving away from rural areas to live in urban areas. What are the reasons for this trend, and do you think it has more positive or negative effects on individuals and society? Support your opinion with reasons and examples. ' mYKN8
The rising notion of people migrating to from rural areas to live in urban areas has been a growing trends. I think the reasons for this is due to the intensely populating metropolis and busy city lives. I believe that this contains a negative and positive attributes that will be discussed in this essay. As city lives increases and modern facilities are also rampaging throughout the years, city life can become very stressful and stringent to any individual. The constant stream of noises from motorways to simple typing noises on the keyboards. An individual will most likely become reluctant to continue this lifestyle and resort to urban life where its more calm and peaceful. The positive distinction is shown by the enhancing an individuals mental health. For instance the peaceful solitude with natures beauty can both mitigate the traditional office stress. A bench on a park overlooking a mountain with the great seasonal gusts of wind can greatly improve our minds to escape the constant stream of noises and tasks that seem to overwhelm us at some point of our lives. Moreover, migrating to urban lifestyle can also improve our respiratory health, with the removal of plethora machine exhausts, industrialized and domestic chimneys. Our lungs can easily be subjected to harmful chemicals where as in the open nature there are no pollution. On the other hand, this can also rise many implications to the urban countryside's, many lands will be lucrative for hotel resorts and summer houses. This can cause a concern to deforestation and increasing population to the land which counteracts the initial motive of leaving the rural areas. As a result, this will inevitably cause more pollution as consumer waste which can initiate a chain reaction of harm towards the environment. In my opinion, we should be able to have a plan between busy and quiet life by fabricating services that replicate the sensation of an urban environment which can help relieve the stress of constant daily troubles. In conclusion, there is a positive and negative spectrums from moving away from rural to urban areas as mentioned above. I also think a plan is needed to have services to help reduce rural stress.
The rising notion of
people
migrating to from
rural
areas
to
live
in
urban
areas
has been a growing trends. I
think
the reasons for this is due to the
intensely
populating metropolis and busy city
lives
. I believe that this contains a
negative
and
positive
attributes that will
be discussed
in this essay. As city
lives
increases and modern facilities are
also
rampaging throughout the years, city life can become
very
stressful and stringent to any individual. The constant stream of noises from motorways to simple typing noises on the keyboards. An individual will most likely become reluctant to continue this lifestyle and resort to
urban
life where its more calm and peaceful. The
positive
distinction
is shown
by the enhancing an individuals mental health.
For instance
the peaceful solitude with natures beauty can both mitigate the traditional office
stress
. A bench on a park overlooking a mountain with the great seasonal gusts of wind can
greatly
improve
our minds to escape the constant stream of noises and tasks that seem to overwhelm us at
some
point of our
lives
.
Moreover
, migrating to
urban
lifestyle can
also
improve
our respiratory health, with the removal of plethora machine exhausts, industrialized and domestic chimneys. Our lungs can
easily
be subjected
to harmful chemicals
where as
in the open nature there are no pollution.
On the other hand
, this can
also
rise
many
implications to the
urban
countryside's,
many
lands will be lucrative for hotel resorts and summer
houses
. This can cause a concern to deforestation and increasing population to the land which counteracts the initial motive of leaving the
rural
areas
.
As a result
, this will
inevitably
cause more pollution as consumer waste which can initiate a chain reaction of harm towards the environment. In my opinion, we should be able to have a plan between busy and quiet life by fabricating services that replicate the sensation of an
urban
environment which can
help
relieve the
stress
of constant daily troubles.
In conclusion
, there is a
positive
and
negative
spectrums
from moving away from
rural
to
urban
areas
as mentioned above. I
also
think
a plan
is needed
to have services to
help
reduce
rural
stress
.
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