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In many countries there has been an increase in social problems involving teenagers in recent years. Many people believe that this is due to modern lifestyles because parents spend more and more time at work and have less time to supervise their children. To what extent do you believe this is true?

In many countries there has been an increase in social problems involving teenagers in recent years. Many people believe that this is due to modern lifestyles because parents spend more and more time at work and have less time to supervise their children. BB3rw
Modern lifestyle has changed many facets of life, particularly the dramatical fall in standard of ethics among teenagers, followed by the rocket in the rate of juvenile delinquency. While parental negligence is considered to be assume primarily responsibility for such adverse issue, I believe that other external components can also contribute as the behind causes. On the one hand, it is undeniable that parents should bear some responsibility for a rise in teenagers’ problems. But regrettably, due to the cut-throat competition and financial solvency for leading cozy life, parents considerably fail to be fully concerned in the nurture of their teens, which would make them lack love, affection and care. It is easy for neglected teens to deeply drop into gloomy state in the absence of parental engagement; accordingly, they have a more tendency to become fierce and violent, and they channelize such negative energies in committing crimes or getting immersed in social issues as a way to catch their parents’ attention. On the other hand, other factors account for a significant part in distress correspond to juvenile age. To start with, as a result of the ubiquity of alcohol overdrinking in modern life, adolescents tend to use these addicted subtances as an solely escape approach for any daily issues without awareness about the detrimental consequences of such violent actions. In this way, abusing alcohol can not only devastate youngsters's vulnerable judment but also exert a serious implication for their natural behavior; consiquently, generation Z tend to be lured into involving in ruthless crimes, like burglaries and vandalism, when getting drunk and being unable to self-control their etiquette, though they never intended to at initially. Futhermore, grown-up are more likely to kill more time on multiple social media channels, toxic contents are mingled with and hidden under many perfect skins, on which be taken an enourmous toll by the incredible digital revolution. Admittedly, this field, namely violence and sexual contents, is trouble-free to inhibit the youngers's perceptions from keeping them on the right track, leading to their misconducts related to sexual harassment and school bullying. For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that the irresponsibility of parents are not completed caused in social issues pertaining to youngsters. However, prevalent contributors, known as alcohol addiction and poisonous content on social media sites, suffer undersirable impacts on people in their teenagerhood.
Modern lifestyle has
changed
many
facets of life,
particularly
the dramatical fall in standard of ethics among
teenagers
, followed by the rocket in the rate of juvenile delinquency. While parental negligence
is considered
to be assume
primarily
responsibility for such adverse
issue
, I believe that other external components can
also
contribute as the behind causes. On the one hand, it is undeniable that
parents
should bear
some
responsibility for a rise in
teenagers
’ problems.
But
regrettably
, due to the
cut
-throat competition and financial solvency for leading cozy life,
parents
considerably
fail to be
fully
concerned in the nurture of their teens, which would
make
them lack
love
, affection and care. It is easy for neglected teens to
deeply
drop into gloomy state in the absence of parental engagement;
accordingly
, they have a more tendency to become fierce and violent, and they channelize such
negative
energies in committing crimes or getting immersed in
social
issues
as a way to catch their
parents’
attention.
On the other hand
, other factors account for a significant part in distress correspond to juvenile age. To
start
with,
as a result
of the ubiquity of alcohol overdrinking in modern life, adolescents tend to
use
these addicted subtances as an
solely
escape approach for any daily
issues
without awareness about the detrimental consequences of such violent actions. In this way, abusing alcohol can not
only
devastate youngsters's vulnerable judment
but
also
exert a serious implication for their natural behavior;
consiquently
, generation Z tend to
be lured
into involving in ruthless crimes, like burglaries and vandalism, when getting drunk and being unable to self-control their etiquette, though they never intended to at
initially
. Futhermore, grown-up are more likely to kill more time on multiple
social
media channels, toxic contents
are mingled
with and hidden under
many
perfect skins, on which
be taken
an enourmous toll by the incredible digital revolution.
Admittedly
, this field,
namely
violence and sexual contents, is trouble-free to inhibit the youngers's perceptions from keeping them on the right
track
, leading to their misconducts related to sexual harassment and school bullying. For the reasons mentioned above, it seems to me that the irresponsibility of
parents
are not completed caused in
social
issues
pertaining to youngsters.
However
, prevalent contributors, known as alcohol addiction and poisonous content on
social
media sites, suffer undersirable impacts on
people
in their teenagerhood.
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IELTS essay In many countries there has been an increase in social problems involving teenagers in recent years. Many people believe that this is due to modern lifestyles because parents spend more and more time at work and have less time to supervise their children.

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