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How I dreamt of joining the Army. And how I prepared myself for the same.

How I dreamt of joining the Army. And how I prepared myself for the same. 5wQom
From my childhood, I always wanted to join the Indian Army. It has been my dream to serve my nation as a Technical officer and be a leader in the battle field. I used to dress up as a soldier in fancy dress competitions in my school, my mother used to buy me Toy guns, and Army related films were always my favourite. The dream had to be turned into a career choice. And soon I realised, I actually had to improve my physical health in order to atleast get a chance of joining the Army. My bodyweight was 45 kgs when I was in class 12, which was very less and almost in the malnutrition category. I had to improve my health and increase my weight. This is when I decided to join a local gym. Over the three years, I have increased my weight from 45 kgs to 65 kgs and it has dramatically changed my body structure and improved strength. I haven't looked back since then, I have pursued my dream and attempted to join the army in several occasions. But unfortunately I was screened out every time. I appeared for the screening process twice, once in Chennai and once in UP. Although my Army dream didn't materialize. I haven't give up, I am still improving myself and I am sure I would definitely get into the Army.
From my childhood, I always wanted to
join
the Indian
Army
. It has been my
dream
to serve my nation as a Technical officer and be a leader in the battle field. I
used
to dress up as a soldier in fancy dress competitions in my school, my mother
used
to
buy
me Toy guns, and
Army
related films were always my favourite. The
dream
had to
be turned
into a career choice. And
soon
I realised, I actually had to
improve
my physical health in order to atleast
get
a chance of joining the
Army
. My bodyweight was 45 kgs when I was in
class
12, which was
very
less and almost in the malnutrition category. I had to
improve
my health and increase my weight. This is when I decided to
join
a local gym. Over the three years, I have increased my weight from 45 kgs to 65 kgs and it has
dramatically
changed
my body structure and
improved
strength. I haven't looked back since then, I have pursued my
dream
and attempted to
join
the
army
in several occasions.
But
unfortunately I
was screened
out every time. I appeared for the screening process twice, once in Chennai and once in UP. Although my
Army
dream
didn't materialize. I haven't give up, I am
still
improving myself and I am sure I would definitely
get
into the
Army
.
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