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How are pancakes related to your studies?

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The alarm clock for most pupils and students seems to be a howling monster in the morning who wants to torture everyone who has to go to school. Those who believe this are greatly mistaken. For this ringing sound early in the morning, when the sun has not yet risen, will certainly unnerve those who have not slept enough, and all of them, sleepily rubbing their eyes, will look for the source of the sound. Why is this happening? The reason is not that students want to sleep for another 5-10 minutes, as many might assume, but because they wake up and think that this will be another terribly boring school day. However, if it were a perfect Saturday morning, then we would see a different picture. The wonderful smell from the morning breakfast, piercing the air, snatches the sleeping boy from the embrace of sleep. The appetizing smell from the pancakes will make any of us wake up before the alarm clock and not cry for not getting enough sleep. Unfortunately, few people share the same zeal for learning as for morning fritters. Every morning I wake up with cheerfulness, a wide smile on my face and a desire to learn in my heart. It is this quality in myself that I put above all. At Nazarbayev Intellectual School we receive high quality education. Therefore, we come to school early in the morning and leave late in the evening. I often hear from my peers that they did not get enough sleep in the morning or do not want to study. My opinion is that each of us should develop in ourselves a love for study, like for morning pancakes. The Stipendium Hungaricum program gives us the opportunity to study at the best universities in Hungary absolutely free of charge. I learned about this program from my school councencor. Hungary is similar in many respects to my homeland. However, this is not the main reason for my choice. Hungarian education is one of the most affordable and high quality in the world. Also, studying at the OTM gives me the opportunity to continue my studies abroad. I believe that my chosen universities, the University of Debrecen and the University of Szeged, will make a fundamental contribution to the formation of a global citizen and professional in their field. These educational institutions date back to the 16th century, have a rich history and authority. According to the Kazakhstan Human Resources Development Center, in 2021 there was a shortage of 30, 000 vacancies for medical workers. In the future, I want to solve this problem and involve young people in this area. For this, I strive to get a quality education, integrating it with the experience of foreign specialists. I began to take steps towards my dream from the 7th grade, having entered the NIS. Having passed the competitive selection, I found myself in a completely different environment. This is how the adaptation process began. After a couple of weeks, I was able to build friendships with all of my classmates. Even then, the flame of desire to study chemistry was blazing in my heart. My teacher noticed this at the first lesson and enrolled in preparatory courses for international chemistry Olympiads. Although I did not become a prize-winner of the International Chemistry Olympiad, I managed to reveal my full potential at the Republican Olympiads. Through hard work and guidance from teachers, I was able to achieve all of this. Also, over the years, I was able to improve my skills in many ways, for example, I spoke with a research topic in the field of ecology at the forum of students from different schools, I am the winner of the 14th Presidential Olympiad of the Republican stage, as well as the winner of the regional stage of the international competition WRO. These achievements were due to the "Pancake Mentality" that I developed in myself. Studying abroad is a new experience for me. There will certainly be obstacles and problems in front of me. However, thanks to my special skills, I will be able to overcome all barriers.
The alarm clock for most pupils and students seems to be a howling monster in the
morning
who
wants
to torture everyone
who
has to
go to
school
. Those
who
believe this are
greatly
mistaken. For this ringing sound early in the
morning
, when the sun has not
yet
risen, will
certainly
unnerve those
who
have not slept
enough
, and all of them,
sleepily
rubbing their eyes, will look for the source of the sound. Why is this happening? The reason is not that students
want
to
sleep
for another 5-10 minutes, as
many might
assume,
but
because
they wake up and
think
that this will be another
terribly
boring
school
day.
However
, if it were a perfect Saturday
morning
, then we would
see
a
different
picture. The wonderful smell from the
morning
breakfast, piercing the air, snatches the sleeping boy from the embrace of
sleep
. The appetizing smell from the pancakes will
make
any of us wake up
before
the alarm clock and not cry for not getting
enough
sleep
. Unfortunately, few
people
share the same zeal for learning as for
morning
fritters. Every
morning
I wake up with cheerfulness, a wide smile on my face and a desire to learn in my heart. It is this
quality
in myself that I put
above all
. At
Nazarbayev
Intellectual
School
we receive high
quality
education.
Therefore
, we
come
to
school
early in the
morning
and
leave
late in the evening. I
often
hear from my peers that they did not
get
enough
sleep
in the
morning
or do not
want
to
study
. My opinion is that each of us should develop in ourselves a
love
for
study
, like for
morning
pancakes. The
Stipendium
Hungaricum
program gives us the opportunity to
study
at the best
universities
in Hungary
absolutely
free of charge. I learned about this program from my
school
councencor
. Hungary is similar in
many
respects to my homeland.
However
, this is not the main reason for my choice. Hungarian education is one of the most affordable and high
quality
in the world.
Also
, studying at the
OTM
gives me the opportunity to continue my
studies
abroad. I believe that my chosen
universities
, the
University
of
Debrecen
and the
University
of
Szeged
, will
make
a fundamental contribution to the formation of a global citizen and professional in their field. These educational institutions date back to the 16th century, have a rich history and authority. According to the Kazakhstan Human Resources Development Center, in 2021 there was a shortage of 30, 000 vacancies for medical workers. In the future, I
want
to solve this problem and involve young
people
in this area. For this, I strive to
get
a
quality
education, integrating it with the experience of foreign specialists. I began to take steps towards my dream from the 7th grade, having entered the
NIS
. Having passed the competitive selection, I found myself in a completely
different
environment. This is how the adaptation process began. After a couple of weeks, I was
able
to build friendships with all of my classmates. Even then, the flame of desire to
study
chemistry was blazing in my heart. My teacher noticed this at the
first
lesson and enrolled in preparatory courses for international chemistry Olympiads. Although I did not become a prize-winner of the International Chemistry Olympiad, I managed to reveal my full potential at the Republican Olympiads. Through
hard
work and guidance from teachers, I was
able
to achieve all of this.
Also
, over the years, I was
able
to
improve
my
skills
in
many
ways,
for example
, I spoke with a research topic in the field of ecology at the forum of students from
different
schools
, I am the winner of the 14th Presidential Olympiad of the Republican stage,
as well
as the winner of the regional stage of the international competition
WRO
. These achievements were due to the
"
Pancake Mentality
"
that I developed in myself. Studying abroad is a new experience for me. There will
certainly
be obstacles and problems in front of me.
However
, thanks to my special
skills
, I will be
able
to overcome all barriers.
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