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Hay Fever Strong Message Constucted thrust satge

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Hay Fever was a comical play with a strong message. The actors throughout this play steadily used others to gain their own attention. The message this play left behind after many laughs was do not use others, plain and simple. The space was a well-constructed thrust stage however, the stage was not raised off the ground and the seats appeared to be mobile which lead to the belief that this is an Environmental Theater. As for the layout of the stage, there was a couch and a table in center stage for the first two acts, a door to the unseen outside front of the house upstage right, there were two large double doors upstage center leading to the backyard garden, and a raised floor upstage left containing a piano, a bookcase and a door leading to the home library. Stage left there was a half spiral staircase that lead up to the second floor which had a painting and lights that extended across to stage right. The second floor also contained the bedrooms for the house but the doors were not in sight. The detail was greater than expected: the hardwood floor throughout the first floor seemed to be genuine, the actual bookcase filled with real books not stage books, and the extremely large double doors with translucent glass and floral designs lead to the Garden, which featured an array of plants behind the doors. The entire space was well lit for the duration of the play; the stage took place inside the Bliss’ home so the bright lighting added a confortable feel to the inside of the house. The theatre was nearly sold out; it was hard to spot an empty seat, including the balcony and lower level seating. The crowd contained nearly an even amount of student audience members and senior citizens; there was few in the audience that appeared middle aged. The play was well cast, the entire Bliss family did a great job showing how overly dramatic and deceitful the family had become. Each actor portrayed their character accurately; there were no standouts that didn’t match the character. Each visitor in the first act seemed to be feasible as far as the possibility of a relationship was concerned. All of the family members acted genuine. There was one actor who stood out as a perfect fit for his character. Taylor Rascher played Simon Bliss and played him perfectly. Rascher’s character Simon was a young man who was dramatic and romantic so much so it was almost to the point of ridiculousness. Rascher stole the show in the first act when he was romancing with Michelle Luz, who plays Myra Arundel. Rascher was displaying his love for Michelle Luz (Myra) in the most dramatic of fashions; he was playing the Bliss’ game of pretending to be in complete love with someone and then a moment later change his mind. Rascher was proclaiming his love with elegant speeches and coddling up next to her and eventually kissing her. Rascher made this scene particularly hilarious because he was completely over the top in typical Bliss fashion. Of course, all of this was for naught because Luz ended up kissing Joe Hubbard’s character David Bliss in act two and also Rascher proclaimed his engagement to Caitlin Stagemoller’s character, Jackie Coryton. Rascher made his voice more shrill and audible to appear to be more dramatic and create more attention for himself. In the same way, Rascher used grander gestures with his arms (flailing, waving, etc. ) to cause a more dramatic effect. The play was well interpreted by all whom were involved. Steven Wrentmore, the Director, kept the 1920’s feel by dressing in all 1920’s costumes and everyone spoke as if they were living at the time. Michelle Bisbee, the scene designer, made the inside of the home appear 1920’s because everything was grand. The Bliss’ home was grand with the spiral staircase, the very large backdoors, and the eloquent piano. The actors’ mannerisms seemed like they were portraying a silent film. In older movies, actors seemed very dramatic and had flamboyant actions to prove so; the actors in Hay Fever shared the same feel for the dramatics. As far as Stephen Wrentmore’s directing goes, he did an excellent job. The scene when Chris Karl (Richard) and Caitlin Stegemoller (Jackie) enter and are left alone to make small talk with each other is the best pertaining to directing. The two actors used the entire stage in this scene and were very awkward with one another. This was Wrentmore’s doing because you could tell he had a vision for this scene in particular because it seemed very crisp and well rehearsed. The actors played it perfect with the excessively long pauses in their awkward small talk that the crowd was laughing through the entire scene. It appeared that Wrentmore instructed the actors, to keep their pauses longer than natural to heighten the awkward tension in the scene, which made it brilliant. The blocking throughout the play worked with the floor plan very well. All of the blocking worked seamlessly; the actors were never out of sight or in awkward positioning (ex. turned around, talking to someone behind them while face forward, etc. ) even during the second act in the first scene while all eight actors were on set. One part of the set that stood out was the staircase, it is obviously very large, but the way Owen Virgin followed Megan Davis up the stairs was seamless. They both walked up the stairs with footsteps I unison, and Owen Virgin was so focused on every detail of Davis, it almost screamed out how much he was infatuated with her. The artistic intent of this production was to entertain, and it fulfilled that intent completely. The entire audience was laughing during most of the production, I was even laughing out loud, which doesn’t happen very often. Every interaction between the characters was comical at one point during the production. An example of this playing out would be in the second act when Rascher busts through the door and proclaims his engagement. The only purpose of this is to entertain and entertain it did. The actors seemed natural moving along with their blocking and engaging with each other on stage. There was no point at which it was confusing why someone moved here or there, every movement made sense. The overall mood that was portrayed by the combination of lighting, sound, set, and costumes was very light and cheerful; at no point did the mood drop to something darker or saddening. This is common with many comedies because it becomes hard to laugh if the overall mood is down and dreary. The theatre space was very personal. First of all, it takes place in someone’s home so it is immediately personal. Also, the stage was built into the crowd just about so the audience felt like they were living the action out as it unfolded. The scenic design showed the audience without a doubt it was the 1920’s, with the barometer on the wall, the staircase, the piano, and the lights upstairs. However, there was little evidence to show what location the play took place. All of the costumes were well designed for the appropriate characters. Adam Espinoza did a fine job of showing how these people were all upper class with nice dresses and suits and tuxes, even when they were home alone with only each other as company. Megan Davis’ costumes represented her personality very well by drawing all attention to her with bright colors and silk-like texture. As far as the lighting goes, there were no changes to the lighting during the play, except for at the end of each act. The lighting emphasized a bright and cheerful mood throughout the play. This production was definitely representational because it doesn’t break the fourth wall into the audience. The actors never had any asides or soliloquies that were directed toward audience. The set and lighting were representational due to the realistic feel throughout the house, everything was relatable to the average person. The Bliss’ home looked like an ordinary home from the 1920’s. The overall message seemed to be: do not mislead people or play games with their emotions, or they will leave you. This was most clear during act three when Luz, Karl, Stegemoller, and Virgin were all discussing how uncomfortable they all had felt the day before in the house and decided to leave as soon as possible. This was due to the way the Bliss’ had romantic engagements just to get attention for themselves and did not care about the feelings of the people they were hurting
Hay Fever was a comical
play
with a strong message. The
actors
throughout this
play
steadily
used
others to gain their
own
attention
. The message this
play
left
behind after
many
laughs was
do
not
use
others, plain and simple.
The
space was a well-constructed thrust
stage
however
, the
stage
was not raised off the ground and the seats appeared to be mobile which lead to the belief that this is an Environmental Theater. As for the layout of the
stage
, there was a couch and a table in center
stage
for the
first
two
acts
, a
door
to the unseen outside front of the
house
upstage right, there were two
large
double
doors
upstage center leading to the backyard garden, and a raised
floor
upstage
left
containing a piano, a bookcase and a
door
leading to the home library.
Stage
left
there was a half spiral
staircase
that lead up to the second
floor
which had a painting and lights that extended across to
stage
right. The second
floor
also
contained the bedrooms for the
house
but
the
doors
were not in sight. The detail was greater than
expected
: the hardwood
floor
throughout the
first
floor
seemed
to be genuine, the actual bookcase filled with real books not
stage
books, and the
extremely
large
double
doors
with translucent glass and floral designs lead to the Garden, which featured an array of plants behind the
doors
.
The
entire
space was
well
lit for the duration of the
play
; the
stage
took place inside the
Bliss’
home
so
the bright lighting
added
a
confortable
feel
to the inside of the
house
.
The
theatre
was
nearly
sold out; it was
hard
to spot an empty seat, including the balcony and lower level seating.
The
crowd contained
nearly
an even amount of student
audience
members and senior citizens; there was few in the
audience
that appeared
middle aged
.
The
play
was
well
cast, the
entire
Bliss
family did a great job showing how
overly
dramatic
and deceitful the family had become. Each
actor
portrayed
their
character
accurately
; there were no standouts that didn’t match the
character
. Each visitor in the
first
act
seemed
to be feasible as far as the possibility of a relationship
was concerned
.
All of the
family members acted genuine. There was one
actor
who stood out as a perfect fit for his
character
. Taylor
Rascher
played Simon
Bliss
and played him
perfectly
.
Rascher
’s
character
Simon was a young
man
who was
dramatic
and romantic
so
much
so
it was almost to the
point
of ridiculousness.
Rascher
stole the
show
in the
first
act
when he was romancing with Michelle Luz, who
plays
Myra
Arundel
.
Rascher
was displaying his
love
for Michelle Luz (Myra) in the most
dramatic
of fashions; he was playing the
Bliss’
game of pretending to be in complete
love
with
someone
and then a moment later
change
his mind.
Rascher
was proclaiming his
love
with elegant speeches and coddling up
next
to her and
eventually
kissing her.
Rascher
made this
scene
particularly
hilarious
because
he was completely over the top in typical
Bliss
fashion.
Of course
, all of this was for naught
because
Luz ended up kissing Joe Hubbard’s
character
David
Bliss
in
act
two and
also
Rascher
proclaimed his engagement to Caitlin
Stagemoller
’s
character
, Jackie
Coryton
.
Rascher
made his voice more shrill and audible to appear to be more
dramatic
and create more
attention
for himself.
In the same way
,
Rascher
used
grander gestures with his arms (flailing, waving, etc.
)
to cause a more
dramatic
effect. The
play
was
well
interpreted by all whom
were involved
. Steven
Wrentmore
, the Director,
kept
the
1920’s
feel
by dressing in all
1920’s
costumes
and everyone spoke as if they were living at the time. Michelle
Bisbee
, the
scene
designer, made the inside of the home appear
1920’s
because
everything was grand. The
Bliss’
home was grand with the spiral
staircase
, the
very
large
backdoors, and the eloquent piano. The
actors’
mannerisms
seemed
like they were portraying a silent film. In older movies,
actors
seemed
very
dramatic
and had flamboyant actions to prove
so
; the
actors
in Hay Fever shared the same
feel
for the dramatics. As far as Stephen
Wrentmore
’s directing goes, he did an excellent job. The
scene
when Chris Karl (Richard) and Caitlin
Stegemoller
(Jackie) enter and are
left
alone to
make
small
talk with each
other
is the best pertaining to directing. The two
actors
used
the
entire
stage
in this
scene
and were
very
awkward
with one another. This was
Wrentmore
’s doing
because
you could
tell
he had a vision for this
scene
in particular
because
it
seemed
very
crisp and
well
rehearsed. The
actors
played it perfect with the
excessively
long pauses in their
awkward
small
talk that the crowd was laughing through the
entire
scene
. It appeared that
Wrentmore
instructed the
actors
, to
keep
their pauses longer than natural to heighten the
awkward
tension in the
scene
, which made it brilliant. The blocking throughout the
play
worked with the
floor
plan
very
well
.
All of the
blocking worked
seamlessly
; the
actors
were never out of sight or in
awkward
positioning (ex. turned around, talking to
someone
behind them while face forward, etc.
)
even during the second
act
in the
first
scene
while all eight
actors
were on set. One part of the set that stood out was the
staircase
, it is
obviously
very
large
,
but
the way Owen Virgin followed Megan Davis up the stairs was seamless. They both walked up the stairs with footsteps
I unison
, and Owen Virgin was
so
focused on every detail of Davis, it almost screamed out how much he
was infatuated
with her. The artistic intent of this
production
was to entertain, and it fulfilled that intent completely. The
entire
audience
was laughing during most of the
production
, I was even laughing out loud, which doesn’t happen
very
often
. Every interaction between the
characters
was comical at one
point
during the
production
. An example of this playing out would be in the second
act
when
Rascher
busts through the
door
and proclaims his engagement. The
only
purpose of this is to entertain and entertain it did. The
actors
seemed
natural moving along with their blocking and engaging with each
other
on
stage
. There was no
point
at which it was confusing why
someone
moved
here or there, every movement made sense. The
overall
mood
that
was portrayed
by the combination of lighting, sound, set, and
costumes
was
very
light and cheerful; at no
point
did the
mood
drop to something darker or saddening. This is common with
many
comedies
because
it becomes
hard
to laugh if the
overall
mood
is down and dreary. The
theatre
space was
very
personal.
First of all
, it takes place in
someone’s
home
so
it is immediately personal.
Also
, the
stage
was built
into the crowd
just
about
so
the
audience
felt like they were living the action out as it unfolded. The scenic design
showed
the
audience
without a doubt it was the
1920’s
, with the barometer on the wall, the
staircase
, the piano, and the lights upstairs.
However
, there was
little
evidence to
show
what location the
play
took place.
All of the
costumes
were
well designed
for the appropriate
characters
. Adam Espinoza did a fine job of showing how these
people
were all upper
class
with nice dresses and suits and tuxes, even when they were home alone with
only
each
other
as
company
. Megan Davis’
costumes
represented her personality
very
well
by drawing all
attention
to her with bright colors and silk-like texture. As far as the lighting goes, there were no
changes
to the lighting during the
play
,
except for
at the
end
of each
act
. The lighting emphasized a bright and cheerful
mood
throughout the play. This
production
was definitely representational
because
it doesn’t break the fourth wall into the
audience
. The
actors
never had any asides or soliloquies that
were directed
toward
audience
. The set and lighting were representational due to the realistic
feel
throughout the
house
, everything was relatable to the average person.
The
Bliss’
home looked like an ordinary home from the
1920’s
.
The
overall
message
seemed
to be: do not mislead
people
or
play
games with their emotions, or they will
leave
you. This was most
clear
during
act
three when Luz, Karl,
Stegemoller
, and Virgin were all discussing how uncomfortable they all had felt the day
before
in the
house
and decided to
leave
as
soon
as possible. This was due to the way the
Bliss’
had romantic engagements
just
to
get
attention
for themselves and did not care about the feelings of the
people
they were
hurting
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