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SMOKING IN PUBLIC PLACES SHOULD BE BANNED. DISCUSS.

SMOKING IN PUBLIC PLACES SHOULD BE BANNED. DISCUSS. wLp2m
I strongly agree that smoking in public places should be restricted and several stringent measures should be taken against those who do so. Smoking in general can create an uncomfortable atmosphere but more so in massive public gatherings. The common sancity of the popular tourist and most admired places should be maintained as at any point in time you can always find massive crowds of people. These public areas are visited by families, youth and old age people. For instance, it would be a disturbing sight if a person smokes in such situation as it causes pollution and also young minds can get influenced to learn these bad habits when they observe someone smoking near them. There are people of all age groups who often visit these famous spots to have an enjoyable quality time with their near and dear ones. Amongst all this smoking in such areas creates an uncomfortable environment and some people who have breathing problems are prone to hazardous effects from the fumes of the smoke. These smoke fumes from the cigarettes cause difficulty in breathing, coughing and as a result a degraded air quality index can be observed. To give a clear example, the insensitivity of the smoker towards the society is always a cause for concern. There are young children and naive teenagers who are likely to get impacted as the young while playing and being in their own world may be drawn to such smoked cigars on the ground and would unknowingly choke on them. On the other hand the teens can be tempted to try smoking by getting influenced. The overall safety is in threat in such a situation. Lastly the smoker gets the constant stares of judgement from people around because of the inconvience which is being caused by the smoker. To conclude i would like to add that smoking not only impacts the health and welI being of the smoker but also has a grave impact on the overall well being and health of the individuals as well the environment. I believe that though we cannot control an individual urge to smoke but as a solution the government should provide a designated place for the smokers to smoke such as a smoking room or some fine must be charged in no smoking zones if smoker does not follow through then stringent measures should be taken.
I
strongly
agree
that
smoking
in public places should
be restricted
and several stringent measures should
be taken
against those
who
do
so
.
Smoking
in general
can create an uncomfortable atmosphere
but
more
so
in massive public gatherings. The common
sancity
of the popular tourist and most admired places should
be maintained
as at any point in time you can always find massive crowds of
people
. These public areas
are visited
by families, youth and
old
age
people
.
For instance
, it would be a disturbing sight if a person
smokes
in such situation as it causes pollution and
also
young minds can
get
influenced to learn these
bad
habits when they observe someone
smoking
near them. There are
people
of all age groups
who
often
visit these
famous
spots to have an enjoyable quality time with their near and dear ones. Amongst all this
smoking
in such areas creates an uncomfortable environment and
some
people
who
have breathing problems are prone to hazardous effects from the fumes of the
smoke
. These
smoke
fumes from the cigarettes cause difficulty in breathing, coughing and
as a result
a degraded air quality index can
be observed
. To give a
clear
example, the insensitivity of the smoker towards the society is always a cause for concern. There are young children and naive
teenagers
who
are likely to
get
impacted as the young while playing and being in their
own
world may
be drawn
to such smoked cigars on the ground and would
unknowingly
choke on them.
On the other hand
the teens can
be tempted
to try
smoking
by getting influenced. The
overall
safety is in threat in such a situation.
Lastly
the smoker
gets
the constant stares of judgement from
people
around
because
of the
inconvience
which is
being caused
by the smoker.
To conclude
i
would like to
add
that
smoking
not
only
impacts the health and
welI
being of the smoker
but
also
has a grave impact on the
overall
well being
and health of the individuals
as well
the environment. I believe that though we cannot control an individual urge to
smoke
but
as a solution the
government
should provide a designated place for the smokers to
smoke
such as a
smoking
room or
some
fine
must
be charged
in no
smoking
zones if smoker does not follow through then stringent measures should
be taken
.
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