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Dangerous situations that I know

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When I was 9 years old. I liked to go swimming with my cousins because our grandmother’s house was near at the beach. One day, my cousin and I decided to swim because we felt very boring to stay at my grandmother’s house. So, we walked to the beach and very happy and excited and we didn’t realise what danger is coming. When we arrived on the beach. We immediate jumped into the sea and swimming, we were enjoying the water because it so warm to feel. Therefore, it caused that we didn't notice that the wave was becoming bigger, and we are very far from the way to go up. My cousin and I was panic, and we felt that we are drowning. But fortunately, there are many men who were swimming help us brought in another side of the beach even the wave was heavy. At first, we were nervous because they brought us in another side of the beach where the waves were heavier and later on, they explain to us why they brought us in another side of the beach, and we understand the reason. After that, the men who save us decided to send us back to our grandmother’s house. We were crying, nervous, and also thankful that we survived. We also learn the lesson for that experience. This is my dangerous experience that I never forget in my life.
When I was 9 years
old
. I liked to go swimming with my cousins
because
our grandmother’s
house
was near at the
beach
. One day, my cousin and I decided to swim
because
we felt
very
boring to stay at my grandmother’s
house
.
So
, we walked to the
beach
and
very
happy and excited and we didn’t realise what
danger
is coming. When we arrived on the
beach
. We immediate jumped into the sea and swimming, we were enjoying the water
because
it
so
warm to feel.
Therefore
, it caused that we didn't notice that the wave was becoming bigger, and we are
very
far from the way to go up. My cousin and I was panic, and we felt that we are drowning.
But
fortunately
, there are
many
men
who were swimming
help
us brought in another side of the
beach
even the wave was heavy. At
first
, we were nervous
because
they brought us in another side of the
beach
where the waves were heavier and later on, they
explain
to us why they brought us in another side of the
beach
, and we understand the reason. After that, the
men
who save us decided to
send
us back to our grandmother’s
house
. We were crying, nervous, and
also
thankful that we survived. We
also
learn the lesson for that experience. This is my
dangerous
experience that I never forget in my life.
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