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Mid-Autumn Festival otherwise known as Mooncake Festival or Moon Festival, is celebrated on August 15th on the lunar calendar (on a day between 8 September and 7 October in the Gregorian calendar). It is named the Mid-Autumn Festival because the 15th day is in the middle of the month and August is in the middle of autumn. About more than 2000 years ago, this festival was a post-autumn harvest celebration to thank God after a bountiful harvest. On this day the moon is believed to be the brightest and fullest. Currently, many people are celebrating the Mid-Autumn Festival such as the Chinese and Vietnamese communities abroad as well as countries in Southeast Asia and East Asia. The Mid-Autumn Festival does not have a certain regulation on the organization that will depend on the culture of that country. For example, in China, on this day families will gather and have dinner together. After dinner, they have the tradition of worshiping the full moon with the belief that it will bring good luck. There are also other activities such as lantern festivals, dragon dances, etc. The Chinese will often eat mooncakes because, for them, roundness symbolizes reunion and happiness. Other dishes eaten are usually the finished product after the crop, such as pumpkin, grapefruit, and grapes. In Vietnam, Mid-Autumn Festival is also known as the Children's Festival. Just like in China on this day people will eat moon cakes or give them to family and friends. Children often join a lantern parade through the streets. Instead of dragon dance like in China, Vietnam will have lion dance because this symbolizes luck and prosperity for every home. In the evening, the children will be told the story of the Moon Man-Moon Goddess-Jade Rabbit, or simply the cozy conversations with the adults or hanging out with friends. On the night of the Mid-Autumn Festival, when the moon is at its highest, it will deal out a mid-autumn festival cake and fruit.
Mid-Autumn
Festival
otherwise
known as
Mooncake
Festival
or Moon
Festival
,
is celebrated
on August 15th on the lunar calendar (on a day between 8 September and 7 October in the Gregorian calendar). It
is named
the Mid-Autumn
Festival
because
the 15th day is in the middle of the month and August is in the middle of autumn. About more than 2000 years ago, this
festival
was a post-autumn harvest celebration to thank God after a bountiful harvest. On this day the moon
is believed
to be the brightest and fullest.
Currently
,
many
people
are celebrating the Mid-Autumn
Festival
such as the Chinese and Vietnamese communities abroad
as well
as countries in Southeast Asia and East Asia. The Mid-Autumn
Festival
does not have a certain regulation on the organization that will depend on the culture of that country.
For example
, in China, on this day families will gather and have dinner together. After dinner, they have the tradition of worshiping the full moon with the belief that it will bring
good
luck. There are
also
other activities such as lantern
festivals
, dragon dances, etc. The Chinese will
often
eat
mooncakes
because
, for them, roundness symbolizes reunion and happiness. Other dishes eaten are
usually
the finished product after the crop, such as pumpkin, grapefruit, and grapes. In Vietnam, Mid-Autumn
Festival
is
also
known as the Children's
Festival
.
Just
like in China on this day
people
will eat moon cakes or give them to family and friends. Children
often
join
a lantern parade through the streets.
Instead
of dragon dance like in China, Vietnam will have lion dance
because
this symbolizes luck and prosperity for every home. In the evening, the children will be
told
the story of the Moon
Man
-Moon Goddess-Jade Rabbit, or
simply
the cozy conversations with the adults or hanging out with friends. On the night of the Mid-Autumn
Festival
, when the moon is at its highest, it will deal out a mid-autumn
festival
cake and fruit.
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