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Comlain letter for a shop assistant

Comlain letter for a shop assistant 3PN
Dear SirI am writing to complain about mobile phone which I recently bought from your shop. After only two days, things started to go wrong. On the 24th of April I went one of your shops in order to buy mobile phone for my mother. Looking arraund your shop I found expected brand, and I wanted to get information about it. There was a shop assistant, he helped me, after I took all information about it I decided to purchase it. But after two days my mother made a call and told me about the item. It worked well the first time, but the second time there seemed to have been a malfunction while it was working, the charge would run out of quickly. In addition to this the phone had a strange sound would come out of suddenly. I would like to you to replace this item with well-functioning one. I expect to receive the same type of brand. Otherwise, unfortunately I will be forced to report this to Customer Service Association responsible for this problem. I look forward to receiving a reply. Your faithfullyAgatha Gristle
Dear
SirI
am
writing to complain about mobile phone which I recently
bought
from your
shop
. After
only
two days, things
started
to go
wrong
. On the 24th of April I went one of your
shops
in order to
buy
mobile phone for my mother. Looking
arraund
your
shop
I found
expected
brand, and I wanted to
get
information about it. There was a
shop
assistant, he
helped
me, after I took all information about
it
I decided to
purchase
it.
But
after two days my mother made a call and
told
me about the item. It worked well the
first
time,
but
the second time there seemed to have been a malfunction while it was working, the charge would run out of
quickly
.
In addition
to this the phone had a strange sound would
come
out of
suddenly
. I would like to you to replace this item with well-functioning one. I
expect
to receive the same type of brand.
Otherwise
, unfortunately I will
be forced
to report this to Customer Service Association responsible for this problem. I look forward to receiving a reply. Your
faithfullyAgatha
Gristle
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