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1. How do you think exploring space can help us improve life here on Earth, now and for the future generations?

1. How do you think exploring space can help us improve life here on Earth, now and for the future generations? Q1MmX
Space is dark and dangerous but finding more about space and exploring planets are interesting and dangerous. Ancient people also dreamed to explore space, but at a certain time period, it was getting true. Finding more information about space is called space exploration. In this essay I will discuss the history of space exploration, how did exploring space help us, and how it will help us in the future. When we go back to the history of the space age, it goes back to the 20th century. In 1957, the first artificial satellite was launched from the Soviet Union, now it’s Russia. After another year, the National Aeronautics and Space Administration (NASA) was established in the USA. In 1961 cosmonaut Yuri Gagarin was the first human in space. After another two years, that means in 1963 cosmonaut Tereshkova was the first woman in space. In 1969 American astronaut Neil Armstrong was the first human on the moon. These are some great achievements won for humans on the earth. To get these types of great achievements when exploring space our ancestors, as well as our animal ancestors, had been tired some of them had been killed by space accidents. But don't get scared of the accidents and learn from those accidents, so you won’t be able to get into an accident. There were many challenges, but they did it so, it's a major reason for space exploration development. Now at present, we are using capsules instead of orbiters. Even NASA has sent a rover to Mars and they're planning to send astronauts to Mars. In 2024 they planning to send the first woman to the moon. Films also broadcasting from space now. At present there’s an international space station in the thermosphere and astronauts are working abroad so, you'll see the development of exploring space. Exploring space is very interesting and it's useful to improve life here on earth, in present as well as in the future. Because of exploring space, we can get the internet through satellites and get connected with our whole world. we can identify the planets that help for life existence and even we can find more about asteroid Falls and harmful effects that will happen in the future to the Earth so we can get safety measures to save our earth by using science, engineering, and mathematics. There’s another use of exploring space if there's a planet with aliens even, we all can communicate with them. If they had very developed technology, we all can get aware of it. This is a covid-19 pandemic situation so if there's a planet with soil that can fight with covid 19. We can get samples and use them as an antibiotic so we can make our earth safe from viruses as well. As mentioned above, explorations have become more useful to make our lives and animals' lives better here on earth. As my idea, it’s better to start exploring the space globally. This type of exploration can be done successfully only for humans as they are super brained than other animals, so it’s a responsibility to explore space and make our lives better.
Space
is dark and
dangerous
but
finding more about
space
and
exploring
planets
are interesting and
dangerous
. Ancient
people
also
dreamed to explore
space
,
but
at a certain time period, it was getting true. Finding more information about
space
is called
space
exploration
. In this essay I will discuss the history of
space
exploration
, how did
exploring
space
help
us, and how it will
help
us in the future. When we go back to the history of the
space
age, it goes back to the 20th century. In 1957, the
first
artificial satellite
was launched
from the Soviet Union,
now
it’s Russia. After another year, the National Aeronautics and
Space
Administration (NASA)
was established
in the USA. In 1961 cosmonaut Yuri Gagarin was the
first
human
in
space
. After another two years, that means in 1963 cosmonaut Tereshkova was the
first
woman in
space
. In 1969 American astronaut Neil Armstrong was the
first
human
on the moon. These are
some
great achievements won for
humans
on the
earth
. To
get
these types of great achievements when
exploring
space
our ancestors,
as well
as our animal ancestors, had
been tired
some
of them had
been killed
by
space
accidents
.
But
don't
get
scared of the
accidents
and learn from those
accidents
,
so
you won’t be able to
get
into an
accident
. There were
many
challenges,
but
they did it
so
, it's a major reason for
space
exploration
development.
Now
at present, we are using capsules
instead
of orbiters. Even NASA has
sent
a rover to
Mars and
they're planning to
send
astronauts to Mars. In
2024 they
planning to
send
the
first
woman to the moon. Films
also
broadcasting from
space
now
. At present there’s an international
space
station in the thermosphere and astronauts are working abroad
so
, you'll
see
the development of
exploring
space. Exploring
space
is
very
interesting and it's useful to
improve
life here on
earth
, in present
as well
as in the future.
Because
of
exploring
space
, we can
get
the internet through satellites and
get
connected with our whole world.
we
can identify the
planets
that
help
for life existence and even we can find more about asteroid Falls and harmful effects that will happen in the future to the
Earth
so
we can
get
safety measures to save our
earth
by using science, engineering, and mathematics. There’s another
use
of
exploring
space
if there's a
planet
with aliens even, we all can communicate with them. If they had
very
developed technology, we all can
get
aware of it. This is a
covid-19
pandemic situation
so
if there's a
planet
with soil that can fight with
covid 19
. We can
get
samples and
use
them as an antibiotic
so
we can
make
our
earth
safe from viruses
as well
. As mentioned above,
explorations
have become more useful to
make
our
lives
and animals'
lives
better here on
earth
. As my
idea
, it’s better to
start
exploring
the
space
globally. This type of
exploration
can
be done
successfully
only
for
humans
as they are super brained than other animals,
so
it’s a responsibility to explore
space
and
make
our
lives
better.
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