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im interested in an advertisement and i would like to know more information about it

Dear Jean Blake,
I was interested in your advertised trip to Himalayas, I would like to be the last piece to your travelling group.
I really like travelling, in my trips in the past I usually volunteering for various organisations in other countries, however this time I would like to make this trip like a vacation for myself to escape my casual everyday routine. I would like to ask about your trip to Himalayas date. And I would like to tell you about my age, I am 20 years old, exactly one year ago I have finished school and I would like to spend these couple of week travelling with your group.
I am expecting that this trip will be an amazing experience for me, therefore I would like to know a little bit more about this trip. Will it be high up, and what conditions in that area are most common?
In conclusion I look forward to speaking to you in real life on our trip to Himalayas.
Kind regards Irvydė
Dear Jean Blake,

I
was interested
in your advertised
trip
to Himalayas
, I would like to be the last piece to your travelling group.

I
really
like travelling, in my
trips
in the past I
usually
volunteering for various
organisations
in other countries,
however
this time I would like to
make
this
trip
like a vacation for myself to escape my casual everyday routine.
I
would like to ask about your
trip
to Himalayas date. And I would like to
tell
you about my age, I am 20 years
old
, exactly one year ago I have finished school and I would like to spend these couple of week travelling with your group.

I am expecting that this
trip
will be an amazing experience for me,
therefore
I would like to know a
little bit
more about this
trip
. Will it be high up, and what conditions in that area are most common?

In conclusion
I look forward to speaking to you in real life on our
trip
to Himalayas
.

Kind regards
Irvydė

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