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Why go to the university?

University is no longer a fresh word to people nowadays. Since the beginning of this century, more and more youngsters choose to enter university after they have completed the study in high schools rather than to join the army or become an apprentice. Therefore, it is kind of interesting to find out the reason behind.
First of all, students can only learn fundamental knowledge during high school while they are able to focus on their own interested majors in universities. This period is the key to knowledge accumulation, which will contribute a lot to the future of an individual. Moreover, university is no doubt the symbol of high education. It offers more than pure knowledge. A degree from a university gives people certain identity that makes them stand out among their competitors. It can be seen from the fact that most international companies will only hire those who have at least a Bachelor's degree in China.
But, as far as I know, sincere dreams might also be the reason for university or college. For instance, in the 60s and 70s, people in China experienced hard times. Many of them had to give up advanced education and take up the burdens of life at their early age. Now, as they became parents or even grandparents, their dream for university education had no doubt realized by their younger family members. Those young people, as reported, often study very hard in order to fulfill the expectations of two generations.
There is no doubt that university can be the turning point of one's future, because higher education will provide people with not only knowledge
prepared for their careers, but also the fulfillment of their life goals. Meanwhile, the society has improved its strength to sponsor higher education. Compared with the past, people now attend universities also because they are able to secure various scholarships and supports from different channels. A very good example is that many Chinese students are now studying in the U. S. Their incentive for application should be attributed to not only to their own performance but also the comprehensive education frameworks in the U. S.
Broadly speaking, people who study in universities have their hopes: to fulfill themselves. At the same time, our society generously provides such an environment for people to achieve such goals. Therefore, when we see more and more fresh smiles on the campus of universities, let us just wish them a promising future.
University is no longer a fresh word to people nowadays. Since the beginning of this century, more and more youngsters choose to enter university after they have completed the study in high schools
rather
than to
join
the army or become an apprentice.
Therefore
, it is kind of interesting to find out the reason behind.

First of all
, students can only learn fundamental knowledge during high school while they are able to focus on their
own
interested majors in universities. This period is the key to knowledge accumulation, which will contribute a lot to the future of an individual.
Moreover
, university is no doubt the symbol of high
education
. It offers more than pure knowledge. A degree from a university gives people certain identity that
makes
them stand out among their competitors. It can be
seen
from the fact that most international
companies
will only hire those who have at least a Bachelor's degree in China.

But
, as far as I know, sincere dreams might
also
be the reason for university or college.
For instance
, in the 60s and 70s, people in China experienced
hard
times.
Many
of them had to give up advanced
education
and take up the burdens of life at their early age. Now, as they became parents or even grandparents, their dream for university
education
had no doubt realized by their younger family members. Those young people, as reported,
often
study
very
hard
in order to fulfill the expectations of two generations.

There is no doubt that university can be the turning point of one's future,
because
higher
education
will provide people with not only knowledge

prepared
for their careers,
but
also
the fulfillment of their life goals. Meanwhile, the society has
improved
its strength to sponsor higher
education
. Compared with the past, people now attend universities
also
because
they are able to secure various scholarships and supports from
different
channels. A
very
good
example is that
many
Chinese students are now studying in the U. S. Their incentive for application should
be attributed
to not only to their
own
performance
but
also
the comprehensive
education
frameworks in the U. S.

Broadly
speaking, people who study in universities have their hopes: to fulfill themselves. At the same time, our society
generously
provides such an environment for people to achieve such goals.
Therefore
, when we
see
more and more fresh smiles on the campus of universities,
let
us
just
wish them a promising future.

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