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Social media has become a real problem for some young people today and government should create laws that allows only people over 18 years of age to have accounts To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In this technological era, eminent of social media is booming amidst millennial physical. Government should implement an ordinance to permit only for adult to use social media; however, it is a genuine threat to the teenagers and children. In my opinion, it should be open to each age group to use social media to connect with world and develop a communication.
To Implies rules on using social media for younger people is not a sterling idea. Nowadays, in the facts of virtual world people are more social and its way of communicating and constructing a new relationship with the unknown individuals globally. Meanwhile, it is a platform to show their talents to the world at young age, countless masses are watching them. For instance, a social media app named “Instagram” on this app features like reels, where crowds can generate a videos and show their abilities by which they can also earn likes and create a medium for themselves to shows their talent. Thus, it is inconvenience to create legislation on utilizing the social media for teenagers and children.
On the other hand some people believe that it create bad impact on the young people. Due to major use of social media teenagers a losing their physical touch of interaction with people; however, it is also impact on their studies. In addition, cyber bullying is also primary factor that built negativity on virtual media. Hence, it is unfair to have government responsibility to keep eye on this early age individuals; therefore, parents should monitor their children.
To conclude, it is unhealthy debate to restrict the use of social media to certain age. While doing this we are snatching the opportunities from younger people and it is acute to generate a law on using such medium by government, it should be equal responsibility of parents too.
In this technological era, eminent of social media is booming amidst millennial physical. Government
should
implement an ordinance to permit
only
for adult to
use
social media;
however
, it is a genuine threat to the teenagers and children. In my opinion, it
should
be open to each age group to
use
social media to connect with
world
and develop a communication.

To Implies
rules
on using social media for younger people
is
not a sterling
idea
. Nowadays, in the facts of virtual
world
people are more social and its way of communicating and constructing a new relationship with the unknown individuals globally. Meanwhile, it is a platform to show their talents to the
world
at young age, countless masses are watching them.
For instance
, a social media app named “Instagram” on this app features like reels, where crowds can generate a videos and show their abilities by which they can
also
earn likes and create a medium for themselves to shows their talent.
Thus
, it is inconvenience to create legislation on utilizing the social media for teenagers and children.

On the other hand
some
people believe that it create
bad
impact on the young people. Due to major
use
of social media teenagers a losing their physical touch of interaction with people;
however
, it is
also
impact on their studies.
In addition
,
cyber bullying
is
also
primary factor that built negativity on virtual media.
Hence
, it is unfair to have government responsibility to
keep
eye on this early age individuals;
therefore
, parents
should
monitor their children.

To conclude
, it is unhealthy debate to restrict the
use
of social media to certain age. While doing this we are snatching the opportunities from younger people and it is acute to generate a law on using such medium by government, it
should
be equal responsibility of parents too.

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