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Nowadays traffic in major cities is worsening. What problem does it create?  How can we help solve this problem as individuals?

Traffic is the tremendous impact on life of the people. It is a serious problem in big cities that people have to deal in the daily basis. I sell analyse the cause and the resultant impact before suggesting feasible solutions.
The first and perhaps the most important reason seems to be the plethora of the way that can make easy buying car. By this, I mean that without any hurdles, we have many the options such as, low interest rate loans availability, government's subsidy, etc, for purchasing a vehicle.
Myriad effects may entail because of the trend. First, traffic, that is the a situation when a lot of the vehicles stuck at the place, is being responsible for wasting time and fuels. Second, air is also affected by traffic because, vehicles are emissioned harmful gases in it.
Numerous solutions can be put in to the place to tackle this problem. First of all, traffic management is the one of the best solution of it. Second of all, government should apply new technology,   implementation the strict rules and also improve the public facility. Third of all, in many country people's behaviour is the major issue in traffic so, they should change or improve it
In conclusion, if the aforementioned solution are properly implemented we can curb this, problem to a great extent.
Traffic is the tremendous impact on life of the
people
. It is a serious problem in
big
cities that
people
have to
deal in the daily basis. I sell
analyse
the cause and the resultant impact
before
suggesting feasible solutions.

The first and perhaps the most
important
reason seems to be the plethora of the way that can
make
easy buying car. By this, I mean that without any hurdles, we have
many
the options such as, low interest rate loans availability,
government
's subsidy, etc, for purchasing a vehicle.

Myriad effects may entail
because
of the trend. First, traffic,
that is
the a
situation when
a lot of
the vehicles stuck at the place, is being responsible for wasting time and fuels. Second, air is
also
affected
by traffic
because
, vehicles are
emissioned
harmful gases in it.

Numerous solutions can
be put
in to the place to tackle this problem.
First of all
, traffic management is the one of the best solution of it. Second of all,
government
should apply new technology,
 
implementation the strict
rules
and
also
improve
the public facility. Third of all, in
many
country
people
's
behaviour
is the major issue in traffic
so
, they should
change
or
improve
it


In conclusion
, if the aforementioned solution are
properly
implemented we can curb this, problem to a great extent.

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