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In future more people will choose to travel abroad for holidays then their own country. Do you agree or disgaree

Travelling is considered an occupation these days. Holidays are an escape plan for people like, to travel to different countries or their own country. In this essay, I will give my perspective on this topic.
In my opinion, People will travel in their own country more as there are many reasons for that. First of all the young generation have forgotten the culture of their country and, parents feel it's their responsibility to make them aware of it. There are several religious and traditional places in their own country, which will help them learn ancient history.
Secondly, there are a lot of travel blogs these days that shows the various remote location and their story on the internet which people find interesting. Tourists then travel to these locations to find something new.
Thirdly, traveling abroad is getting expensive, as people believe in savings and enjoying at the same time. Everyone is busy and, it is hard to take out time from work to travel abroad so, people prefer short vacations. Moreover, the young generation is more focused on developing the nation, so traveling in their own country and, promoting it would attract foreign tourists wich will help in economic growth.
To conclude, it is up to individual choice about where they want to travel but, I strongly believe that traveling brings a lot of opportunity for some people and they know how to make most of it.
Travelling
is considered
an occupation these days. Holidays are an escape plan for people like, to travel to
different
countries or their
own
country. In this essay, I will give my perspective on this topic.

In my opinion, People will travel in their
own
country more
as
there are
many
reasons for that.
First of all
the young generation have forgotten the culture of their country and, parents feel it's their responsibility to
make
them aware of it. There are several religious and traditional places in their
own
country, which will
help
them learn ancient history.

Secondly
, there are
a lot of
travel blogs these days that
shows
the various remote location and their story on the internet which people find interesting. Tourists then travel to these locations to find something new.

Thirdly
, traveling abroad is getting expensive, as people believe in savings and enjoying at the same time. Everyone is busy and, it is
hard
to take out time from work to travel abroad
so
, people prefer short vacations.
Moreover
, the young generation is more focused on developing the nation,
so
traveling in their
own
country and, promoting it would attract foreign
tourists
wich
will
help
in economic growth.

To conclude
, it is up to individual choice about where they want to travel
but
, I
strongly
believe that traveling brings
a lot of
opportunity for
some
people and
they know how to
make
most of it.

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