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describe a yelling man who you had experienced.

describe a yelling man who you had experienced. pD3
In our life we come across things such as hearing people yelling on their phone, which is very common, some people may hear a person in need or hear someone talking over a crucial situation, we hear good and bad things when people talk and our experiences may be different from each other. Around five months ago I’ve came against one of my most dismissive experiences in my life, through out my senior year in high school, me and my friend went to buy some groceries, by the time we got into the eggplant section we overheard a man yelling on his phone and cursing, back then, in our teenage years me and my friend, we were really curious about these things, we walked up to they guy to hear about the reason why he is yelling, fortunately the phone was on speaker. there was this woman crying and saying I didn’t do it you are mistaken! the man continied yelling and saying you should fill out the form. the perspective that me and my friend got from this was, the woman on the phone was her wife and she was caught by her husband when she was with another guy and filed for divorce, the story was so interesting to us because we had never came upon something like that. when the guy got off his phone he threw some groceries around, he was exploding with anger, we got so scared so we ran out of the store. To come to an end, , my point of view of this experience was to always remind myself to never trust anyone, even your love ones can stab you in the back and betray you, and turn to a hypocrite, you never know what is actually going on inside others peoples heads, so the best thing is to only trust yourself if you wanna keep living this life.
In our life we
come
across things such as hearing
people
yelling on their
phone
, which is
very
common,
some
people
may
hear
a person in need or
hear
someone talking over a crucial situation, we
hear
good
and
bad
things when
people
talk and our experiences may be
different
from each other. Around five months ago
I’ve came
against one of my most dismissive experiences in my life,
through out
my senior year in high school, me and my friend went to
buy
some
groceries, by the time we
got
into the eggplant section we overheard a
man
yelling on his
phone
and cursing, back then, in our teenage years me and my friend, we were
really
curious about these things, we walked up to they guy to
hear
about the reason why he is yelling,
fortunately
the
phone
was on speaker.
there
was this woman crying and saying I didn’t do it you
are mistaken
!
the
man
continied
yelling and saying you should fill out the form.
the
perspective that me and my friend
got
from this was, the woman on the
phone
was her
wife and
she
was caught
by her husband when she was with another guy and filed for divorce, the story was
so
interesting to us
because
we had never
came
upon something like that.
when
the guy
got
off his
phone
he threw
some
groceries around, he was exploding with anger, we
got
so
scared
so
we ran out of the store. To
come
to an
end
,
,
my point of view of this experience was to always remind myself to never trust anyone, even your
love ones
can stab you in the back and betray you, and turn to a hypocrite, you never know what is actually going on inside others
peoples
heads,
so
the best thing is to
only
trust yourself if you
wanna
keep
living this life.
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