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Are there have to be rules in museums?

Everyone wants to spend their leisure time with maximum use. Museums are great example for that. While most of the people agrees that there should be minimum rules but maximum fun, in my opinion, there have to be certain rules to avoid damaging the artifacts.
In exhibition people can see hundreds of artifacts which belong to ancient times. It is amazing to have an access to the past times, even though those time travelers are very fragile. However, most of the people doesn't acknowledge this fact. Though i understand that the touching is first reflex and yet visitors have to know that every touch harms the artifact. In other words, there have to be a rule that avoids it.
Also, a couple of rules are set to make visitors time spending more fun and less harmful to each other. In conclusion, even though most visitors think that rules chaining them, that specific rules makes their visit more fun and less harmful for artifacts, so future generations can see them either.
Everyone wants to spend their leisure time with maximum
use
. Museums are great example for that. While most of the people
agrees
that there should be minimum rules
but
maximum fun, in my opinion, there
have to
be certain rules to avoid damaging the artifacts.

In exhibition people can
see
hundreds of artifacts which belong to ancient times. It is amazing to have
an access
to the past times,
even though
those time travelers are
very
fragile.
However
, most of the people doesn't acknowledge this fact. Though
i
understand that the touching is
first
reflex and
yet
visitors
have to
know that every touch harms the artifact.
In other words
, there
have to
be a rule that avoids it.

Also
, a couple of rules
are
set to
make
visitors time spending more fun and less harmful to each other.
In conclusion
,
even though
most visitors
think
that rules chaining them, that specific rules
makes
their visit more fun and less harmful for artifacts,
so
future generations can
see
them either.

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