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The table below shows the percentage of pupils who entered higher education from five secondary schools between 1995 and 2000 inclusive.

The table illustrates five different type of secondary schools with percentage of students who enrolled university education from last 5 years.
Overall, the Roystone academy, Fairfield girls and crackend boys school had quite similar percentages in individual every years while, Greystone High school was plummet and Harble Secondary school was exceeded in their percentage inclusive years.
It can be seen clearly, the Greystone hight school was highest in percentage in the big inning of the year(1995) after that, gradually go down and pick (70%) at the year of 2000. Moreover, the Harble secondary school was least percentage as compared to other school 30% in the starting year, and further constantly raised stick at (80%) in 2000.
On the other hand, the Roystone academy and crackend boys school students had approximately 60% overall the year, whereas, Fairfield girls education students were a bit surged about 70% inclusive the year. In additionally, the year of 1999, all five secondary school were in identical percentage more or less 65.
The table illustrates five
different
type of secondary schools with percentage of
students
who enrolled university education from last 5 years.

Overall
, the
Roystone
academy, Fairfield girls and
crackend
boys school had quite similar percentages in individual every years while,
Greystone
High school was plummet and
Harble
Secondary school
was exceeded
in their percentage inclusive years.

It can be
seen
clearly
, the
Greystone
hight
school was highest in percentage in the
big
inning of the year(1995) after that,
gradually
go down and pick (70%) at the year of 2000.
Moreover
, the
Harble
secondary school was
least
percentage as compared to other school 30% in the starting year, and
further
constantly
raised stick at (80%) in 2000.

On the other hand
, the
Roystone
academy and
crackend
boys school
students
had approximately 60%
overall
the year, whereas, Fairfield girls education
students
were a bit surged about 70% inclusive the year. In
additionally
, the year of 1999, all five secondary school were in identical percentage more or less 65.

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