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the graph below shows the changes in young adult unemployment rates in enland between 1993 and 2012

The given graph illustrates the shifts in young people who are unemployed in London and the rest of England during 1993 and 2012.
Overall, the proportions of people aged 16-24 experienced an upward trend while the overall figures decreased. Throughout the period, young adults aged 16-24 in London witnessed the highest figures out of all 4 groups investigated.
In 1993, the rates of unemployment among people aged 16-24 in London registered 22%. During 1994 and 2002, there was a significant decrease to 15% in 2002 before reaching a peak of approximately 25% in 2012. A similar pattern underwent in the percentages of unemployed people in the same group, which declined considerably from 17% to just over 10% in 2004 before rising to about 20% in 2012.
In contrast, at the beginning, the figures of jobless peole in London registered nearly 15%. After a progressive plunge to only half between 1993 and 2008, it then remained stable around 10% at the end of the period. Besides, there was also a downward tendency in the rates of the rest of England which it dwindled from 10% to 5% between 1993 and 2008 before stabilizing at about 7% afterwards.
The
given
graph illustrates the shifts in young people who
are unemployed
in London and the rest of England during 1993 and 2012.

Overall
, the proportions of people aged 16-24 experienced an upward trend while the
overall
figures decreased. Throughout the period, young adults aged 16-24 in London witnessed the highest figures out of all 4 groups investigated.

In 1993, the rates of unemployment among people aged 16-24 in London registered 22%. During 1994 and 2002, there was a significant decrease to 15% in 2002 before reaching a peak of approximately 25% in 2012. A similar pattern underwent in the percentages of unemployed people in the same group, which declined
considerably
from 17% to
just
over 10% in 2004 before rising to about 20% in 2012.

In contrast
, at the beginning, the figures of jobless
peole
in London registered
nearly
15%. After a progressive plunge to
only
half between 1993 and 2008, it then remained stable around 10% at the
end
of the period.
Besides
, there was
also
a downward tendency in the rates of the rest of England which it dwindled from 10% to 5% between 1993 and 2008 before stabilizing at about 7% afterwards.

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