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What he heard and what happened next

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Let suppose the boy in the picture be David. The characters in the story are David and his friend called Tom, and the next one is Teacher Kay who is a lecturer at University where David goes to. This is David who is an 2nd year medical student. It maybe around the end of first semster of the school year I think. We are having classes as usual, when it is about to start next lecture, a small lady with very fair complexion wearing round glasses comes into the lecture hall. She looks very attractive in appearance and with the first impression, she got all my attention. Later I knew that she, teacher Kay, is a brilliant at teaching, I love the way she teaches and her way of communicating with students showing respect others either older or younger. I want to have a close relationship with teacher Kay but I am afraid to speak to her. Sometimes, when she asked students to discuss lessons, I raised my hand to participate and when she said that my response to her question is right, I felt I was on cloud nine because I was craving to get compliment from my inspiring teacher. One day, when I was about to come into my room, I heard some whispering speech. So I listened carefully with my ear on the door, it was a conversation of my roommate, Tom, and a senior. The senior was telling Tom about me that teacher Kay once said that David's learning style is mature and smart although I don't know his background. Oh my god! I suddenly opened the door and asked my senior to repeat what he said. I was very happy that I called my best friend and told her that I got a great compliment from my beloved inspiring teacher. It was one of the most best news I've ever heard in my life.
Let
suppose the boy in the picture be David. The characters in the story are David and his friend called Tom, and the
next
one is
Teacher
Kay who is a lecturer at University where David goes to. This is David who is an 2nd year medical student. It maybe around the
end
of
first
semster of the school year I
think
. We are having classes as usual, when it is about to
start
next
lecture, a
small
lady with
very
fair
complexion wearing round glasses
comes
into the lecture hall. She looks
very
attractive in appearance and with the
first
impression, she
got
all my attention. Later I knew that she,
teacher
Kay, is a brilliant at teaching, I
love
the way she teaches and her way of communicating with students showing respect others either older or younger. I want to have a close relationship with
teacher
Kay
but
I am afraid to speak to her.
Sometimes
, when she asked students to discuss lessons, I raised my hand to participate and when she said that my response to her question is right, I felt I was on cloud nine
because
I was craving to
get
compliment from my inspiring teacher. One day, when I was about to
come
into my room, I heard
some
whispering speech.
So
I listened
carefully
with my ear on the door, it was a conversation of my roommate, Tom, and a senior. The senior was telling Tom about me that
teacher
Kay once said that David's learning style is mature and smart although I don't know his background. Oh my god! I
suddenly
opened the door and asked my senior to repeat what he said. I was
very
happy that I called my best friend and
told
her that I
got
a great compliment from my beloved inspiring teacher. It was one of the most best news I've ever heard in my life.
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